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Ethereal
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Please check out my new track 'Untitled' and post your comments here!!!
Rough preview. Let me know what you guys think. Any suggestions and comments are welcome.
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"drum'n'bass eto bezdna sovershenstva" translated: "drum'n'bass is the impact of perfectness" ... "Bad Ambitions" - Subwave
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23-02-2008 01:12 |
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thechronic
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rough preview indeed
It starts right into the middle of the action
The heavy stereo widened melody that repeats every 8 bars (plays in isolation at 1:43) is certainly too loud.
I like the hypnotizing repetitive feedbacky thing that loops in the background. Drums are ok, bit too dark maybe, could use some more bite.
I especially like the anarchistic feel of the track
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23-02-2008 17:14 |
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Binary Havoc
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Interesting stuff man, kind of pounding and relentless in the main part
I'd like to hear some variation in the arrangement
difficult to tell where its going without
very very muddy mix
sounds like you put the whole mix through a low pass filter set at around 8k??
Peace
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24-02-2008 00:41 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, the mix is very muddy. Needs a lot more clarity, especially the low frequencies stuff. I do like this style tho, it's interesting. The amen break is good but needs a bit more heaviness. The kick is not thumping enough for a tune like this, imo. But yeah, good stuff. Enjoyed.
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24-02-2008 09:43 |
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Ethereal
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Thanks a lot for the suggestions and feedback guys.
Working on the EQing of the drums now, will try to do the best I can to give it what all you guys are saying it needs.
Will drop the synth that hits every 8 bars. It was definitely to loud, and will probably be giving the bass a small revamp and doing what I can with that.
Glad to hear you guys liked the main idea though, thats good to know.
Thanks again for the feedback guys.
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"drum'n'bass eto bezdna sovershenstva" translated: "drum'n'bass is the impact of perfectness" ... "Bad Ambitions" - Subwave
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24-02-2008 19:42 |
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