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orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental


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Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Subjunction12' and post your comments here!!!

Started this one a couple of days ago. Any tips on this?


This track has been deleted on the producer's request

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22-02-2008 13:39 Homepage of wrm
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Good intro. Dark vibes and sounds, all geling well together. Good overall sound.

Love those down tuned basslines in the build up.

Drop - cool, unique stuff. Don't I've heard any dnb like this before. Sounds more like a Ministry (industrial metal band) tune to me, especially with that squelchy vocal.

Very cool melody. I'd defo jive to that.

Good use of an Amen break. Really freshens up that beat.

A tune like this defo calls for some distorted melodies. One option would be to go for a rock sound. The beat kinda lends itself to that. This is defo not a normal dnb tune, so I wouldn't even attempt a conventional approach. It's unique and I'd try to develop that unique sound even further.

Wicked stuff, liked it a lot. Happy

Btw, any chance of reciprocating a review of my latest tune - The Black Agenda?? Cheers bud. Big Grin

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22-02-2008 18:45 Homepage of Tomos
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Intro needs cohesion, it's just a bunch of sounds now. Lead is rather boring (sound and melody) and doesn't fit with the rather dark vocal.
Track needs a clear concept.

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22-02-2008 22:58 Homepage of BattleDrone
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