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brucifer 
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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Please check out my new track 'More' and post your comments here!!!
Made with reason 3. I made this track pretty quickly a couple of weeks ago, just not sure how to finish it.
Please let me know how it sounds. What does it need to fill it out?
It may be clipping a bit. I tried using Ozone to master it a bit. The thing is, my speaker, a dodgy cheap old gheto blaster, isn't the best set of studio speakers out there 
Any comment appreciated, even negative ones!
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17-02-2008 01:40 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Too many high frequencies on the hi hats. Did you put them through high pass? Snare is also too high for me, needs a bit more bottom end thump.
Sub is very good. The melodies are pretty good but need some variation. The same bassline is repeated throughout most of the track - you need another bassline or set of melodies.
Everything in the mix sounds loud to me. You might wanna bring the master level down to let the sounds breathe.
Not bad, but I've heard better from you. 
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17-02-2008 09:40 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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It's a solid base for a track, but it needs variation of all sorts, it is too repetitive.
Just try and see for yourself what does the trick, can't really tell exactly where to take it from here.
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17-02-2008 14:39 |
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CLARKFADER
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hi , 4 me , its too fast , too repetitive , not much goin on , nice idea thou , but needs alot more "imo" , drums sound nice but , the speed lets them down !!
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17-02-2008 14:44 |
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Alfieboy
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Registration Date: 17-02-2008
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Hi there, some nice sounds going on, quite dirty. Think it really needs a bit more going on with the beat to break it up a bit though. A few breakdowns and build ups + maybe some sort of pad sound.
I also use Reason 3, can't beat it really, not the best for mastering though. Think Reason 4 is supposed to be better at that.
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17-02-2008 18:19 |
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Binary Havoc
Binary Havoc
Registration Date: 25-07-2007
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EZ
Is a bit repetitive and defo needs some variation to the beats and bassline.
Beats are a bit lightweight in the lower frequencies which probably is down to your monitoring set up.
keep at it
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