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Acoustiks 
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Registration Date: 28-06-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Something I wanna' Say' and post your comments here!!!
Its not quite done yet, but comments on the progress so far would be appreciated.
The snares see a bit load.
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14-02-2008 01:02 |
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BattleDrone
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Love the groovy drums, sounds fit together very well. Great filter automation. Rhodes tend to get a bit boring. The lead should get used more wicked.
Has some very promising elements... with the right layout this could be a real banger!
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14-02-2008 02:06 |
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thechronic
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Intro:
drums sound nice, crisp and fresh like the air on a winter morning (really!! 
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Jazzy rhodes piano is nice too, the dark sound of it goes well with the drums, but I don't like the rhythm of the last two chords on it, i would prefer
x--xx-x---x--x-- instead of
x--xx-x---x-x--- if you know what i mean lol
the rhodes gets a bit repetitive too
soundwise no problems imo
How is the copyright on the vocal btw? 
It's a nice start, would be great if you finish it
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14-02-2008 15:43 |
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Tomos
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Really, really solid stuff. Enjoyed it a lot. Yeah, those rhodes are in danger of becoming tiresome. Fresh, crisp beats. Nice vocal fx. Great melodies... finish it mate, sounds fanastic.
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15-02-2008 20:08 |
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Acoustiks
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Thanks for the comments/help. I'll defiantly change up the Rhodes. 
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16-02-2008 17:51 |
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jimbodw07
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no i think the snare is perfect,I mean as long as its not clipping or anything. The vocals towards the end really give the feeling of a warm summer evening, chilling on ur patio. the piano is pretty catchy too. Its relaxing and a tune for crusin.
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17-02-2008 05:32 |
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Binary Havoc
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Yo
Nice vibe from the off.... Rhodes sample is nice if a little repetitive.
Nice bass line, great vocal samples but tune is absolutely crying out for a live vocal
Snares not too loud at all imo
Loads and loads of potential here
Good stuff
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18-02-2008 13:36 |
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Alfieboy
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Registration Date: 17-02-2008
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Really likin this, the beats and bass fit nicely, intro is nice. The keyboard/organ sample could progress a bit, little too repetitive. Great ideas though.
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18-02-2008 14:00 |
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Dj Casket
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Registration Date: 26-02-2008
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i like this sound. reminds me of city life for some strange reason. chillin
. nice sample before the build. the drums sound so good. like an amen layerd with some good samples. very nice. cool bassline. so far so good. the bass itself seems like it could be alot better with some acoustic bass tone to it. cant really say anything more then just keep it rollin..
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26-02-2008 19:48 |
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Seven Gun
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nice intro.
i agree with chron on the last rodes hit tho. need to come after, or just clone and edit each 2nd bar so it changes up a little.
sounds meld together nice. chilling to this.
bass is too quiet, give it a major boost so it pushes more.
nice work so far.
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27-02-2008 19:45 |
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