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CULTURE BOY 
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Registration Date: 12-01-2007
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Please check out my new track 'TRUST' and post your comments here!!!
started this today thinking jump up but couldnt get a vibe after i made the intro so i striped the beats and stuff and subtled down my wobs n stuff n this is what i got so far. could do with a few ideas cos even tho im liking the sound i know im gonna be getting " more variation and more samples needed " not just off the .be crew but everyoe else, you guys seem the bet place to be asking questions as you ALL have a lot to say ha ha. big ups the .be fam as always. made this as always on fruity 7. the samples are from some i picked up off of the david carbone series. ( very very good ) peace and feed back taken as per.
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12-02-2008 01:35 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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I don't think it works to start the drums like that and then stop 'm right after --> Confusing. Better us highpassed drums for the intro and put some delay on them so it's clear that they are not to serious.
Intro sounds rich and full. actuall track is too empty in comparison. Intro sounds liquid, mian part sounds jump up. The 2 should meet somewhere.
Snare needs punch, drumline is a bit empty, reminds me of DJ Krust's track Warhead somewhat.
The horns in the intro make it sooo liquid that it is almost impossible to get it to glue with that square bass, I'd leave the horns out and replace them by something less liquid. Not sure if an icecold square bass is the right choice for this track.
The bass seems to distort sometimes, cut back on the mids, lowpass.
I'd love to get my hands on this one 
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12-02-2008 10:10 |
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OBLIVION12
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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i cant really offer you any technical advice coz you allready know more than me about this game! i love all you tunes mate! wobble bass crazyness! really like the delayed vocal in the intro! works really well, id be lost now without the david carbone drumloops lol, Amazing work after just one day lol,
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12-02-2008 11:05 |
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CLARKFADER
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OH MY GOD , I THINK THIS IS WICKED , F**K KNOWS HOW IT GOT SUCH A LOW RATING AT THE START !!!!!!!!!! nice track mate , could have come in a bit better , maybe a nice cymble or something to give it some extra feel , but nice , i like it , wobbley !!!!!!!!!
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12-02-2008 14:23 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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I defo recognise some of the samples in this! 
Not too keen on the snare tbh. It needs more ring in it to sound more natural I reckon. Nice kick tho.
Very cool wobble basslines. I would actually like to hear more of the bass and less of some of the samples in this track.
Beats are pretty good. Maybe a tad.... dare I say it.... standard.
Some more dominant melodies would be good. Sometimes this track goes a little flat, like from 2.09 to 2.31. The jazzy pads are cool and I like it when it starts sounding old skool, like from 3.14 to 3.57.
If this was my track, I'd start incorporating some old skool junglist vibes in this - melodic subs, warm jazzy pads, layer an amen on the beats, keep the vocal sample, a few hooks... that sort of thing.
A good start, it just lacks a bit of depth at the mo.
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12-02-2008 18:32 |
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DRS
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Registration Date: 12-06-2007
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big fan of that firestorm sample at the beginning of the track, use it alot in my tunes. loving the stabs. drops into a very minimal wobbly bass. got a good vibe to it, not too jump up though. very simple melody. it is quite hard to think of ideas to add to the track, once you go down the minimal road if you start adding things they can generally seem out of place. bass sounds, drums and melody variations are what you need but i am sure you already know that. good little beat though
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13-02-2008 17:16 |
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bullybeef
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Registration Date: 19-02-2008
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oi oi that tunes sounds ok fella
nice chilled out parts with a nice round beeline
should sort out ur snare to phat it up but i think its a good tune bass is nice and jump up and the melody goes well fella think its going to be a good tune throw in the rides hi hats to give it a bit of speed
dont really like the claps init but hey its not my tune lol
do like the drop the bassline sounds likes suv tune on full cycle cant reember whats its called lol
the second part beeline is sick fella or my dayz got my weed out and doing a 2step in the living room hope to here more from you fella peace out
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19-02-2008 18:05 |
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CULTURE BOY
v v v iv a record missing
Registration Date: 12-01-2007
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19-02-2008 18:20 |
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Really dig your overall sound.
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20-02-2008 16:09 |
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