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the moneyshot 
str8 outa nocash
Registration Date: 31-12-2007
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Please check out my new track 'the outsider' and post your comments here!!!
just summit im workin on, just wanted too know if i should finish it?
everyone keeps tellin me my levels are out but this sounds fine through my earphones. still cant afford my monitors yet so this will have too do.
anyway thanks for listening.
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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10-02-2008 17:43 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Kick is too boomey, snare sounds to thin, basicallyt the drums are pretty weak on this track. Add some break underneath...
The sub you layered under the synth is too loud, boomyness again. Your headphone/soundcard seems to suck at reproducing bass.
Don't pan your drums! Drums should be mono.
Intro sounds promising compared to the main part of the track it is much better.
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10-02-2008 20:27 |
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shadraq
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Registration Date: 01-02-2008
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keep working good build up you could take it the other way and go melodic like the build up, remember mastermind i've started so i will finish
something don't sound right with synth give it some fx, pursue wid it mate.
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11-02-2008 13:05 |
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DRS
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Registration Date: 12-06-2007
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vocal a little bit to loud at the begging. dont really like the extreme panning , if you are going to pan the vocall dont do it so drastically. drums very weak and basic. the lead is overpowering the drums and has left the track feeling empty and hollow. if you reproduce it spending a lot of time on the drums you could bring it round to a half decent track, or you could put this one down to experience and move on.
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13-02-2008 17:50 |
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Tomos
Infidel
Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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The bass at around 1.12 is much too bassy. Beats need to be turned up a bit. Melodies are nice, so too is the vocal sample. Cool, mellow jazzy vibes.
Beats need a lot of work. The start off ok but once the track gets going you need to think about beefing them up and getting them to roll more - a stronger hi hats and bongo pattern would be a good start.
Worth finishing. Cool melodies.
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