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OBLIVION12
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'edrush' and post your comments here!!!
Used Rob Papen synths for this! i love that Blue one, structure is a little better than previous, i think im making slow progress in general which is great! please comment and give me some tips! cheers
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09-02-2008 16:24 |
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CLARKFADER unregistered
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wow , thats alot better , love the filtering at the begining , "BUT" WHERES THAT SNARE MAN , CANT HERE IT TOO WELL !!!!!!! boost that up , could be a hit , alot better work !!! still , this needs more work , great parts to it but i was waiting 4 a big drop and dident get it , too many faint samples , boost them up , nice 1 mate getting there !!!!!!!
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09-02-2008 19:01 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, parts of this are pretty good - love that bassline and vocal together, particularly around 2.50. Really, really good. This is much better from you. Simpler, cooler melodies, darker vibes. Keep it up, this is good shit.
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09-02-2008 20:32 |
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OBLIVION12
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Cheers geezer! looking forward to moving on and making something new now! after all these hours stuck in front of a computer monitor im glad to have made a small improvement! thanks for you comments as always. Ive been thinking about havin a go at dubstep but i think i better stik with dnb and master that first
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09-02-2008 20:51 |
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OBLIVION12
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thank for that and thanks for all your review mate! your comments are helping me! this site is helping me! all your tunes are wicked mate! that last one was awesome i rated it! cheers again
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09-02-2008 20:53 |
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djgrim
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i like this one to me its one of them tune you can chill out to.
i think its been put together very well and dont think there is much you can do to make it better nice one safe
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09-02-2008 23:19 |
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Sephiroth
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loving the atmos in the intro, rob papen synths sounds sweet as.....
nice use of vocals too, liking the drum automation, adds a nice touch. track builds up nicely.
drop is okay, could do with a banging snare, snare sounds a little weak, a big snare would drive the drums along much better, bass could be a little too, sounds too weak.
production is good, arrangement is nice as well, the drop just doesn't have enough beef to it, kinda lets the track down, definetly got potential tho i reckons.
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10-02-2008 15:57 |
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BattleDrone
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I love BLUE as well dude, some really cool sounds can be pulled out of it (but it's buggy too). Great Amen work, good atmosphere, something wrong with the mixdown of the break, it sounds thin on the high-end. Track could be much more banging if the drums were pushed to the max and some clear bass elements were added. There's plenty of room for extra sickness in this track. Some pad business is a tad too silent.
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10-02-2008 16:36 |
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2clix
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We both seem to be improving alot! yea man robs shit is amazing, I use predator like its going out of style!
Yea I like the synth work it sounds a lil pendulumishy if you dont mind me saying,
nothing to complain about structure wise
snare needs some beef,
love the filtering of the drums sounds good
good work hombre, we can only get better
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10-02-2008 19:50 |
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shadraq
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Great build up love the filtered drums good sounds the tunes rolling, dark, bad i'm into it mate.
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11-02-2008 13:36 |
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DRS
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good vocal. drums good, i would rex them up though and vary the ridem. a little bit too much filtering going on. the beat on the drop needs beefing up. a stronger kik and snare. nice eerie vibe though.
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13-02-2008 17:56 |
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brucifer
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THat synth is nice. The vocal are good aswell.
The drums sound a bit dull.
The bass needs a slight wobble to it I think. Sound a bit clinical
NOt a bad track over all.
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17-02-2008 05:29 |
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