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2clix 
Doctor Obvious
Registration Date: 17-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'See the sin' and post your comments here!!!
Just a rough draft right now
made in fl7
still trying to grasp the idea of frequencies and eqing
keep that in mind when listening and maybe some helpful tips on the subjects would be appreciated
feedback please!!!
peace
2clix
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08-02-2008 00:09 |
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OBLIVION12
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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heavy drums nice! bass is gnarly! its a little repetitive though! give it a few tweaks and this will be quality! dont like the flanger on the bass! id lose that! i too am having trouble with eq!!keep it up dude
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08-02-2008 01:54 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Wow - big beats!! They sound fantastic - maybe that kick is an ant's pube too loud tho. It would crush most people's ears at high volume! I'd simply turn it down slightly. Sounds like it is clipping too.
Bassline at 2.00... fuck, that's good!! The only thing it needs are a few more highs I reckon. It's just edging on been a tad muddy. But maybe that was the sound you wanted, so forget that comment.
Man, this sounds sooo much bigger than your previous tunes. Wtf happened to you? Did you get personal tutition from Dillinja or something? 
I like your melodies in this. Kinda trancey in some points. You don't make conventional tracks at all. That's why I probably really like your stuff. This one is probably your best. 
Btw, if you want me to act as sound engineer, I'd be happy to help. Simply send me over the zipped FL folder and I'll attempt to make a few little tweaks to get the sound just right. I won't make any changes to the tune itself. If that's not poss, no probs.
(I'm stilling working on one of the tunes you sent over a few weeks ago. I hit a brick wall - writers block 
- but I'm gonna attempt to pick it up again tomorrow and see what happens.)
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08-02-2008 16:50 |
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collective
TeamSleaze.com
Registration Date: 28-11-2006
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you are getting alot better man the beats are strong like the heavyness on them
some of the sounds are still a tad weak not much depth on it like
but yeah send tomos this one let him try mix it down for you man
you can tell you are learning though man
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08-02-2008 16:57 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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This sounds really good dude... nothing to complain about, get some more variation going on.
I love the basses a lot. The kick is overdone though. Huge improvements going on here 
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09-02-2008 10:40 |
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Sephiroth
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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nice intro, no messing about straight into it with that frantic feeling, drums are nicely put together with some decent variations.
intro synth stutterey thing is nice, good touch.
maybe more layering on drums, main kick and snare stand out well but the percussion doesn't really add to them much, could do with more beefing up.
nice work f**kin up the vocals, lol, loving that.
not sure about the flanger (or maybe phaser effect) on the bass, sounds a little wierd, you could layer up the bass and automate the flanger/ phaser on the top end of the bass, might sound better?
nice work overall, maybe a little repititive but defo got a nice feel to it, loving that vocal slicing, sounds like the good ol' glitch to me, lol.
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