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collective 
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Registration Date: 28-11-2006
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Please check out my new track 'twisted dream' and post your comments here!!!
ok people
just a full track of done and well ive put it on here for you to listen to, i know the beat has been used before
and the track isnt fully mixed down yet so some bits will be out and that but anyway slate it hate like all opinions are welcome
ta peeps
o and quality of track may be down as i had to put it in 25k mp3 as it was to big as 320
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did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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07-02-2008 19:54 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Sounds nice, but where's the bass? The pads are too silent. Needs more variation.
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07-02-2008 20:37 |
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collective
TeamSleaze.com
Registration Date: 28-11-2006
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as i have said i havent finished this yet its still work in progress needs to be mixed down so as you can hear levels aint set on it yet but the bline comes through on makies alright so mabe turn it up for now and you may hear it alright
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did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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07-02-2008 20:50 |
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OBLIVION12
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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wicked mate! nice vibes throughout ,very loud and bass kick CooL! yeah its like a hypnotic roller! lol i listened to it all! rated
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08-02-2008 15:06 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Dreamy stuff as per. I like it. Love the opening melody.
Haha! I certainly recognise that drum loop - used it on a track a while ago. Nice isn't it. Really crisp and fresh.
Btw, because this is still a work in progress you should have ticked the "preview" box so everyone knows it's not finished.
Yeah, defo needs a sub bassline in there to make it really warm and toasty. A few more jazzy elements would be cool too. Maybe a flute too.
Cool stuff. Keep developing it.
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08-02-2008 16:57 |
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Sephiroth
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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decent build up, pads are nice and pan between left and right nicely, gives a good sense of space. pretty spacey tune, doesn't seem to be much bass either, addition of a bassline and maybe some twisted synth bass would give it more juice.
real hypnotic track, good work, loving the atmos.
maybe make the drums a little more interesting with more percussion etc.
good work overall tho.
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