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brucifer 
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Kill Me!' and post your comments here!!!
Follow up to my track, 'no title'. Hope it's better than the last on. 
All sounds ect done with Reason 3
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01-02-2008 11:13 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Those pads are too high pitched, it's just white noise now and it doesn't add anything.
Drumline is pretty ok, but it needs more layering. Avoid a lot of reverb on basses. Track needs more identity, it's to repetitive now.
The drums and the bass should be really upfront, the rest comes more or less in between.
Some good elements there, work some more on them
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01-02-2008 21:30 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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the white noise pads reminds me of Surya's track we did a remix compo with, Wan Yi O, interesting how reason playas will use the exact same sounds.
oddly it's track that could be quite a good track with a dj spitting in it. solid beat, but the repatativness is dancefloor/dj friendly. it's like listening to a song instrumental that's suppose to have vocals...
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02-02-2008 09:47 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
the white noise pads reminds me of Surya's track we did a remix compo with, Wan Yi O, interesting how reason playas will use the exact same sounds. |
Erm, meybe he used the samplepack? Even the drums sound the same
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02-02-2008 11:08 |
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wTrouble
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Registration Date: 01-06-2005
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Sort out those fx bits straight away! No good!
I'm enjoying this but now it's just looping away and I'm waiting for something to happen!
Work on some variation and the levels of the elements of this track.
Good ideas, keep working at it
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04-02-2008 07:52 |
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shadraq
Producer
Registration Date: 01-02-2008
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The reverb needs sorting out on the bass,
this track needs
work on the quality that pads is just noise
try filltering or EQing, it the basics are ok
some good sounds but quality needs work.
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06-02-2008 11:47 |
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That one has got me head bobbin. Sounds like you are you using pretty heavy compression there? When those loud FX come in - like on 1.44 for instance - the whole volume on the mix drops. This happens on every one of those loud FX. It sounds horrible tbh and fucks with your ears at high volume. 