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djphrenzy
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Please check out my new track 'The Creeps (V2)' and post your comments here!!!

Completely new basses/synth business, but kept all of the other goodies. Reworked the breakdown and drop.

Would like reviews of this version compared to the previous version pls. Pleased

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23-01-2008 19:11 Homepage of djphrenzy
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i didnt hear the other version. but i like this one so far.

nice intro. good progression.

wow! sounds really nice when the hip hop break comes in.

nice dirty reece. luv the twisting and bending..

drums sound really nice and fat.

solid track! i nice one. cheers!

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23-01-2008 22:30
Binary Havoc Binary Havoc is a male
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ez

an improvement on an already strong tune.

Great atmosphere, cool melody that works brilliantly with the break (still think the verbs a bit wet on the melody)

lovin the new basses, the drop at 2:15 is quality man.

Really punchy mix.

Good stuff, big score from me

Bigup

BH

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24-01-2008 16:56 Homepage of Binary Havoc
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Woooow, really feeling those vibes!! Shocked

This version is definitely deeper and heavier. The sound is improved too. Punchy and fat like Binary mentioned.

No bad words to say to this at all. Just keep doing what you're doing with this tune because it's working big time for me! Drool Love

This one gets a big score from me. Big Grin

Any chance I could have an MP3 when it's finished??

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24-01-2008 18:32 Homepage of Tomos
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Man, this is totally awesome. I love it. Nothing to complain, but make it final!
24-01-2008 20:05 Homepage of Gregg
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very cool mate. not my usual stuff but like what ya got going on. beats sound fat n the atmos ya got going feel very nice. good effort

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24-01-2008 21:59 Homepage of CULTURE BOY
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This is nicely done my son!!

this is now sounding more polished that the last version.

that drone type background sound from about 1.55 to around 2.35 is a bit loud after the drop. I'd drop that down a bit imo

in fact a few of the long drone sounds are a bit too loud in the mox for my tastes

what might be a good idea and something i've done before with these type of sounds is set up a compressor on the drones/pads set the sidechain input as a spare send then send your kick and snare to it so it ducks a dB or 2 , can give a nice groove and movement to the sound.

Also set up a second sidechain on another compressor (still on the pads/drones) and send the basses/reeses to it but this time make it so it frequency dependant so it only ducks when the basses open up into the higher frequencies.

or you could just turn them down Big Grin

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25-01-2008 11:28 Homepage of D2o
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i recognise that loop in the intro, david carbone drum n bass masterclass sample if im not mistaken?
pads and atmos in the intro are nice, real airy and spacey, track builds up well, no complaints there.
bass builds up well, lush reece sounds, breakdown at about 1:55 is lush, loveing that.
drop is quality, bass is real nice, drums sound good.
top tune! everything sits well in mix, structure and arrangement is spot on, bass is pumping.

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26-01-2008 14:18 Homepage of Sephiroth
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Sorry, I didn't hear the old version...

The track sounds like it should be a Black Metal track really! I do like it.

I have no complaint or recomendations, so I'm not much use to you, sorry!

Nice track though. Smile

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27-01-2008 09:50
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Nice creepy into. Drop is pretty sweet, but u should really lower the pad and bring in the bass so that the pad fades out. Loving the main part that bass has a sick twist to it, got my head bopping off the bat. I would have really like to hear the a short 16-32 bars of just the bass and beats roll after the main drop, so u get a feel for the vibe in full, without anything else taking away from the feel .At 2:57 pad comes in way to loud, and at 3:19 the arpeggio is a tad bit too much need to lower that a bit. Overall pretty sick tune, just needs some fine tuning.

Respekt!

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30-01-2008 19:35 Homepage of Philthy McNasty
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