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Invent 
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 03-09-2005
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Please check out my new track 'Collision' and post your comments here!!!
This track i started to produce last year in late December, and wel been busy with it since. Every couple of weekends once in awhile.
Im still not happy with the state of the track i think it could use some extra elements such as some guitar could be a nice addition to some parts of the track and i might take care of the likes of it. Im also working out some extra stabs and chords to place in the main melody but havent found anything to taste yet. So pretty much im a bit stuck right now. Thus i figured i should post it to get some comments or something.
Comments appreciated on production, sound and techniques. OR just globally a comment on the overall track is cool too...
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21-01-2008 00:44 |
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tribePL
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Registration Date: 13-01-2008
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hi i aint a pro at producing but i listen to dnb since i can remember so although this track doesnt really suits my style its a really nice chilling out one.
Firstly about drums hihat and snare suits pretty well, but kicks could have more power, a bit more bass i just feel them too empty.
sounds at 1:48 and 2:05 are outta place, to me.
i was quite dissapointed about 2nd drop down, but im used to harder stuff so maybe thats why
overall this is a rly nice chilling out track you just need to add some additional elements and (i would) make kicks more powerfull
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by tribePL: 21-01-2008 01:07.
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21-01-2008 01:06 |
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Gregg
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Good & clean production imo. I like the filter on the pad in the beginning. The section after the first drop could be a bit more powerful, or just less empty.
After that distorted bassline comes in, you could introduce a little & short ultra powerful part, with heavy drums and an evil bass. Try it, but it may destroy the relaxing groove of the tune.
Gj, I like it!
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21-01-2008 14:13 |
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CULTURE BOY
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22-01-2008 23:38 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Cool tune mate. I don't agree with tribePL tho - I reckon those kicks are plenty loud enough. They sound quite prominent through my Sony headphones, nice and warm. Lots of structural changes in there, it would definitely take a few listens to really get into this track. But that's a good thing. Got me bonce bopping to this as I write. Nice bouncy feel to this. 
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23-01-2008 18:39 |
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