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cynik

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Please check out my new track 'denial' and post your comments here!!!

one more Big Grin

a bit softer neuro techy shit

cant seem go anywhere with it Frown

any comments/ideas/suggestions welcome Drummer

off to reviewing

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20-01-2008 13:48

Invent Invent is a male

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haha the intro confused me for a moment... i cannot make much out of this track as far as the intro goes... you got a bunch of nice deep sounding sounds (those leads and stuff)... your snare can use some more punch but later in the track it seems to be better in its place.. at 1:40 time this hihat you got going doesnt feel in its right place... i like the overal 'metal' compressed sound of your track.. i feel that the track comes together pretty wel.. and the atmosphere of the concept stays solid throughout... good job

ow yeah as ideas.. perhaps you can make a fat break inbetween with some pads and get some of those darkey pad sounds in there to create some atmosphere and leave the main break which should be this wat you have now coming in later... but as wat to do with it its difficult to say... you got a time taker on your hands here which could come out good or bad in the end

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20-01-2008 22:21

BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male

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There's something wrong with the kick drum imo, can't figure out what it is, but I tend to focus on it too much. Track sounds nice, but it's a bit targetless I guess. The tempo changes are nice, especially the one near the end.

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21-01-2008 00:23

Lightningflash Lightningflash is a male

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HI
nice bassy backgound
I think a synth playing a few memarable notes though it may give us something to lach on to.
snare is a lil bit back in d mix

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22-01-2008 00:00

CULTURE BOY CULTURE BOY is a male

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production is nice. i can see where ya coming from when ya say ya dont know where to go with it mate cos iv got loads of em ha ha. dunno really what to say Frown

nice production tho

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22-01-2008 23:40

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Hahaha... this sounds just like something my buddy materia would produce. I dig it. Neuro techy funky goodness.

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23-01-2008 03:19

Tomos

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I loooove those dark synth melodies mate. Amazing, my kinda vibe for sure. Sounds almost like Tool or something. Interesting things going on with the beats too - perhaps the snares could do with a volume boost tho. The beats kinda take a back seat in this track but that's nice, the track is better for it. As already mentioned, the track lacks a bit of structure and definition but it's still very good. The only thing I'd change is to try and make those melodies even deeper. Perhaps add some more sub in there. Niiiiice tune.

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23-01-2008 18:26

cynik

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the octaves are mostly c2, a few c3 which is very deep, which means some of the soudns could be done different..

cheers for taking a listen peeps

anymore takers?

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24-01-2008 07:00

Binary Havoc Binary Havoc is a male

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ez cynik

good ideas, like the synth work, got a nice vibe.

needs some lower end bass work i reckon n maybe the mid synths could use abit more drive

drum programming pushes it along nicely

a bit different to your usual

I like

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24-01-2008 17:51

D2o

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sorry its taken me so long to get round to this Big Grin

anyway

what's up with that tempo thing your fucking with, not gonna win you any favours from many djs Tongue

nice synth and layering work from you as usual,

typical cynik work here.

does seems to go nowhere. And like ol flashy said its needs some sort of hook

you got anymore breaks for em to hear?

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25-01-2008 11:52

cynik

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Originally posted by Ghost
you got anymore breaks for em to hear?

well this is not a breaks site. watch myspace closely tho Devil

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25-01-2008 19:03

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