Schmidi - I Think You're the One

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Schmidi - I Think You're the One

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Schmidi Schmidi is a male

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Registration Date: 26-07-2007
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Please check out my new track 'I Think You're the One' and post your comments here!!!

Been awhile since I've made or heard one of those simple steamroller kind of b lines. This one is simple but effective. As odd as it may sound, I really want to add an RnB vocalist (ala 90's girl groups) to this one because it is kind of walking the line between evil and melodic. Could be a cool play on different styles. Hope you enjoy it!

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Schmidi: 16-01-2008 16:04.

16-01-2008 16:01

collective collective is a male

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you need to sort out your drums as they sound like the layers are not hiting at the right points giving them a slack feel to them

the synth is simple and none plus at all

just seems to out of time really the bline is not that good could be a lot better mate no ofelling to the whole track at all very thin no sounds going on

the drums are tighter at around three mins so that is better but still an none inspiring track here at all

sorry for the slating but you won learn with ppl telling you its good when its not will ya

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16-01-2008 18:46

Tomos

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Not so sure about this man. Sounds disjointed to me. The different parts don't flow together. Needs more direction. I do like the sound of that snare tho. Sounds great.

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16-01-2008 20:14

BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male

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Intro sounds a bit empty, better add some distraction. When the main bass gets introduced you do it too much in a hurry, give it time, build tension. Drums need more variation, you seem to just play a set of readymade loops for over 6 minutes, slice and rearange.
Kick and snare need to be more present, layer layer layer. Vocals could help fill your track, but don't overdo it and watch out with copyright. Get vocals from breakbeat paradise.

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16-01-2008 22:49

D2o

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Sadly this isnt quite a good as the last one.

Like the congas, just that beat that comes in is real thin it sounds nice but has no sustance.

And like Tomos said, it feels a little disjointed.

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17-01-2008 10:12

kaliyuga kaliyuga is a male

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i like the beat, not 2 sure bout the noise in the intro, sounds a bit 2 weak 4 me, needs more around it. beat needs more on the kick in, b line needs more merging with the beat as well, still the track could go places.

17-01-2008 13:26

Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male

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Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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nice beats.. sounds cool when they kick in.
although.... they do sound a bit too fimiliar and could do with more layering.
more edits on the intro would help too.

the drop is cool. nice composition.
hmmm.. i like this... my head is nodding as i type.

just sort the kick and snare out with some more punch and do more beat edits and this will be spot on.

nice track!

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17-01-2008 16:09

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