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Please check out my new track 'Part of the Plan' and post your comments here!!!

Hey .be

1st tune iv made in beards and not only that its the first time in my years as a producer that hasn't been made with reason!

Bit of a melodic, mellow roller.

As per any critique welcome be it good or bad.

Now off to work ina bit so i'll rinse out some reviews when i get back Wink

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16-01-2008 14:41 Homepage of D2o
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nice work mate. free flowing vibes here. chilled like ice! very nice work

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16-01-2008 14:53 Homepage of CULTURE BOY
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like the start with the chilled out vibes not so sure on the synth mate makes it sound cheap like

the piano is nice like that should have just left it with that

filtered beats are nice as long with the vocal sounds in thwe back very breathy

bline is nice and sweet brings you along with the beats nice very hallow like not sure on that little skip in the beats m,ate sounded off

the synth is beter later on but mabye try another sound instead of that if you know what i mean the mid range bline sound is nice to

love the feel on this mate need molding togethe rso all the sounds pan out an mix into each other not sure on the arp mate but thats me

love the filter work again


good work my man nice one

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16-01-2008 18:56 Homepage of collective
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This has got your style all over it man. Kinda reminds me of Binary's stuff too for some reason.

Totally diggin the warm, atmospheric vibes. Sitting next to an open fire looking out at the dark sky as I write - this is the perfect tune for that.

Good levels, excellent filtering work. The whole thing is really, really clean sounding. You could eat your dinner off this tune... that doesn't make sense you get me drift.

My only criticism would be that the melodies sound like they need an extra synth in there to fill out the sound some more. They are ever so slightly thin sounding. Wouldn't take much to put right. Maybe layer up a few sounds and stuff.

Great to see ya back with your tunes buddy. Big Grin

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16-01-2008 19:56 Homepage of Tomos
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i think it's a good track not missing anything. pro work that has pay potential.

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16-01-2008 20:50 Homepage of Halph-Price
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Thanks for all the great feedback people. Some great constructive stuff to work on too!!Big Grin

I must admit some of the sounds are very bassic but i was trying to work with speed and then go back to correct things later,

well i say speed this has still taken me a few days lol

@Tomos

Are you actually in front on open fire? If so i quite jealous. This house is friken freezing!! Mad

Will post an update soon!

Cheers Bigup

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16-01-2008 21:57 Homepage of D2o
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Are you actually in front on open fire? If so i quite jealous. This house is friken freezing!! Mad


Yep, lovely and toasty in here too bro. Mind you, we haven't got gas or electricity in Wales yet so we're still on the ol' coal. Fingers crossed we've gonna have some next year.



That's a joke by the way guys. Wink

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16-01-2008 22:54 Homepage of Tomos
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I guess this was protools then ey?

Sounds really pro dude, maybe a bit on the friendly side for my taste, but technically it is sweet.


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16-01-2008 22:59 Homepage of BattleDrone
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REALLY NICE chillout tune. Melodies are great and the bass is nice to roll with. The beats are awesome but could use some more development and change over time. The snare at the drop could be more effective somehow. Really like the synth work and vocals used. The wobble introduced at 2:15 is nice but could be more interesting. Some mixing work could be done during the breaks to give them more atmosphere as some of the pads/choir sounds get lost in the mixed as they are filtered. The 2nd drop build up is great, but then the actually drop is a bit of a let down. I think you could introduce a new melody to make it more interesting at this point. Other than that. This is the best tune i've heard on here (only heard 6 but yeah). Really tight work!
17-01-2008 07:45 Homepage of cheezdotville
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That's a joke by the way guys. Wink


Glad you pointed that out you almost had me going for a minute there Big Grin

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17-01-2008 10:50 Homepage of D2o
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@BD yes this is indeed Pro-Tools.

It feels quite liberating to finally to be able the get away from reason Big Grin

Cheers for the feedback all. Going to be working on this today as i have the day off Big Grin

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like the nice chilled out intro, nice break, good easy roller, if it was me i would take it abit more dirty, but thats me. i like it, nice 1!
17-01-2008 13:33
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quote:
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quote:
Originally posted by Ghost
Are you actually in front on open fire? If so i quite jealous. This house is friken freezing!! Mad


Yep, lovely and toasty in here too bro. Mind you, we haven't got gas or electricity in Wales yet so we're still on the ol' coal. Fingers crossed we've gonna have some next year.



That's a joke by the way guys. Wink


lol... dont lie tom, you miner! Big Grin


tune......

filtered break is always a good start.
sort that ear peircing sound out on it tho, i reeled back from speakers.

synth work is excellent.. i would expect nothing less.
beats are nice and chunky, all logistics like!

ooh.. i love the tek wobble oversynth later on.
that made me turn my system up!

there is a synth on the intro that sounds out of place with the rest of the track.. sounds a bit cheddar (coming from me!!) lose that synth imo.

that second drop gave me goosebumps.
another hour on this and its done mate.
sick tune.. purely sick. very VERY pro sounding.
bet you having been touching yourself over this tune eh?


i would like a copy of finished version if you would so good as to send me one on aim.. or a pm with dl link plz.
cheecky twat eh? lol

great tune jim, large mounta respek!!

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17-01-2008 16:19
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Hey man, I love the feel of this track. It is as you say, nice and mellow. The melody is very smooth, and make the track feel squishy and spacious. The instruments are all tip-top, and gel very well together. The bass sounds ethereal, and still holds the low end down. The melody synths also sound wicked. I think you have a very tasteful and fairly transparent approach with effects, as they all hold the song together nicely without being oppressive or mucky. I personally would have preferred a little more variety in the drum track; it didn't really blow my mind, and it wasn't that fast. For what it was, however, it served nicely, and kept the mood smooth. I would definitely dance to this shit, and slam 12 beers while i do it. Keep up the good work, and good luck!

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I will start of that this is not completely my style....however, the quality of the tune is what made me write a little note.
It's one of the cleaner sounding tunes here on this site.
The layout is good and it has a good flow to it. It's beats are tight and all the sounds seem to have there own spot in the mix. This is what most people don't seem to get...everything needs space to breath.


Cheers,

Sarin

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quote:
Originally posted by Tomos
This has got your style all over it man. Kinda reminds me of Binary's stuff too for some reason.



I'd be more than happy to put my name to this Teeth

As a reason user I'm obviously pretty upset that your 1st protools offering sounds this good Jimmy

Clean, pro sounding mix.

lovin the filtered breaks

Good stuff

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This is lovely! Wouldn't change a thing. Pleased

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24-01-2008 19:21 Homepage of djphrenzy
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Thank you all for the kind comments. Big Grin

Still not quite finished this Frown

need to pull my finger out really

Its getting there though and hopefully it should be done in the next week or so Wink

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25-01-2008 12:39 Homepage of D2o
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Wow! real nice. Don't know what really to say on this.

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