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Please check out my new track 'itchy twista' and post your comments here!!!
yeah, started remaking the song, kept most of the basslines, added a new synth and played around with the beats a little.. i'm pretty happy with it's sound.. although i'm worried that won't catch on.. review me and gimme some good intel on what yet needs to be done.. hope can help me learn to master properly.. anywayz, hope u dig this one..
review= me very thankfull..
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15-01-2008 23:57 |
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dip_registered
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i get lost in the very first part of the intro!! then those click beats come in....cool!!
FUK YEA i LOVE first drop to the half time temp....that makes me look up at the club speakers and go YEEEAAAH. You got that down pat.
but unfortunetely u need to work on the drop from that to the normal tempo drum and bass part!! it sorta walks in and loses me straight away.
I'm listening on crap logitech speakers at the moment, and the bass is overpowering the mix.
Man I love it wen u drop to half time!! it gets me every time. You should check out dubstep.
I liked the drop to the drum and bass part on the second drop at 2:04...that build was nice. then again at 2:26.
Hmm refreshing for a change of sounds. It didnt get boring! I need to work on that with my tracks =S. Work on the mix a little. overall nice work! Fuk yea at 3:36!!
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16-01-2008 03:15 |
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BattleDrone
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The elements in the track don't glue together very well, there's too much going on at the same time.
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16-01-2008 10:04 |
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thx dip.. well yeah the producing kinda stinks cuz it's that darn fruity.. it just doesn't get along with my computer.. worst 150 euro's i've spend.. although i just can't keep my hands of it you know.. practicing that eq shit everyday..but shit it's true what they say, you'll only get better at it.. and shit don't come fo free. and i love dubstep but then a little creature inside me always secretly prays for a drop and boombastic dnb.. it's just in the heart. lol and battledrone, which sounds should i cut on.. looking from the records under your name ur one who knows his shit.. would appreciate your help.
thx all
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16-01-2008 12:57 |
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16-01-2008 14:30 |
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is it crazy good or crazy bad.. lol
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16-01-2008 16:26 |
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rainey
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yo! writing as i listen...
like the start, its makin me wanna know whats gonna happen next, the slow beat thats dropped is nice!
the main beat has kicked in and its not to my taste, to skippy and it all seems to be empty now.
hmm nothing is fitting as well as i thought it would, all the right bits are there but it seems to go a little allover.
ok break it pretty sweet with the same slow beat as before that i like....
ok the drop needs build up. and id say play around with that bassline because its coming accross really weak and like not even a bassline. the synth is cool and the actual melody is alright. id like to steal that bit from you! lol
overall, layer the kick to make the beat stand out more, give that bassline some tweaking. personally id drop the skippy beat but some people like that.
hope this helps
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16-01-2008 18:11 |
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Tomos
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I like the element of suprise in this track. Particularly like the melodies in the intro.
Starts to get a bit disorganised pretty quickly after that. The beat pattern just isn't working for me, it's too rigid and military style. Personally, I'd like to hear a more flowing, groove-based beat.
Lots of different sounds all going off at once - probably too many.
The tracks loses all it's reverb for a while from about 4.30. Was that a mistake? It doesn't sound natural.
Not my style, but I appreciate your unique ideas.
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16-01-2008 19:45 |
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thx for the help peepz i'll get on it asap..
greetz
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16-01-2008 21:59 |
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kaliyuga
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i like the intro, nice and fresh and new. the kick in is not really my cup of tea, i just want it to go flithy, it stays to jump up and nice 4 me. structure and overal sound is kool.
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