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rainey
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hey i dont actually use the net much to get reviews done so i thought just put a tune up on myspace.

please give it a listen and let me know what you think, i know its not fantastic but pointers would be awesome!

can you give me marks out of 10? lol easier to tell where i am then lol

(ps. myspaz has made the start sound distorted. it wasnt when i uploaded it Mad )


cheers

rainey

This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by rainey: 15-01-2008 19:00.
15-01-2008 18:34
rainey
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nobody even gonna say a word? thats the most unencouraging thing that could happen.
15-01-2008 22:17
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Mate, you need to bag yourself some producers rights and starting posting your tunes on here. Also, you've defo gotta review other peeps's tunes otherwise you can't expect to get reviews yourself.

Your MySpace tune shows promise - beats are pretty solid. FX are ok, they create a darkish atmosphere. You really need to turn that bass up tho, I can hardly hear it. Also, you need to get a more dominant melody in there, it sounds pretty empty with just the FX playing on their own. The breakdown in the middle is far too long.

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15-01-2008 22:45 Homepage of Tomos
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Yeah

As the welshman says - You need to get your producer rights and post your tunes on here as well as doing your fair share of reviews if you want a decent response from folks.

As for your tune

As a first effort it shows some promise definately. I think the drums are a little quiet and could do with a bit more oomph, the 8 bit style fx could probably drop out some of the time as it gets a little monotonous after a while, the breakdown is hugely too long. Bass is pretty good.

Keep at it

Peace

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16-01-2008 14:23 Homepage of Binary Havoc
rainey
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thanks for your comments. i'll try do some reviews for others tonight and any other time that i ahve spare.

as for the tune i was gonna shorten the break but left it obviously i shouldnt have lol

im glad you dont think its terrible tho, so i'll carry on with the direction im going in.


im currently trying to teach myself music theory which is proving difficult lol
16-01-2008 17:45
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