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CLARKFADER
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nice track mate , sounds good to me !!!!!!!!
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15-01-2008 17:33 |
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Binary Havoc 
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EZ Phrenzy
Like the atmos in the intro, maybe cut some of the reverb a touch on the kyoto keys melody ting.
Want to hear more of that quiet reese when it breaks down and maybe you could add a bit of distortion to the basses generally
Think the drop works pretty well myself.
Structure you got so far works pretty well
Good stuff, enjoyed
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15-01-2008 19:03 |
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BattleDrone
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First 2:10 Fucking brilliant, the drop needs work indeed, tearing deep dark basses needed to phatten things up a bit.
The intro melody reminds me a bit of tubular bells by Mike Oldfield 
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15-01-2008 20:19 |
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Halph-Price
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to binary havoc critique of Reverb on the musical percussion.
fuck that, reverb FTW, sounds good like the cowbell quote goes, "Really explore teh room" reverb gives such great depth that you miss in the clubs but really enjoy in the headphones. opens it all up.
i like how it's not all a Balls to the wall in yuor face make your ears bleed mix, it would work very well for movie sound track, or tv show background music.
there's money there more so then club music just so ya know. and the fade at the end, you obviously made this for a demo. you could use tracks like this to show off music for movies it's not hard , i would look in that more. nice action and intensity but it's got a very open feeling it it, not dark, not happy, just driven, very Sci-Fi.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 15-01-2008 22:44.
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15-01-2008 22:40 |
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man your way too modest.. wish i could do what you did just there, yourr kick is just too cristal clear... nothing wrong with the bassline imo.
nothinh else i can say.. good sh*t
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15-01-2008 23:27 |
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dip_registered
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likein every part of this... sounds like shpongle at the start!
beats pretty energetic, maybe add a few delay effects onto some vocals or fx for a warmer sound throughout the intro.
oh man, i love the bass breakdown. This is perfect!!
along with the bells is sounds sick. The pad that comes in around 3:00 is sweet 2.
Maybe work on the drop, man you could make the first part of that break sound 10x better with an awesome drop. I like the way the beat sort of 'walks in'.
Well done!
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16-01-2008 03:24 |
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2clix
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Feels like the critical thinking part in an 80s zombie movie at first, you know, like when there coming up with a plan to kill the zombies and their all motivated 
good tune, I agree the bass needs a little more grit, structure is really good, drums are crisp and clear, pretty much great tune.
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16-01-2008 08:10 |
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Binary Havoc
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
to binary havoc critique of Reverb on the musical percussion.
fuck that, reverb FTW, sounds good like the cowbell quote goes, "Really explore teh room" reverb gives such great depth that you miss in the clubs but really enjoy in the headphones. opens it all up.
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easy HP
I only said a touch dude - the reverb works
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16-01-2008 14:06 |
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CULTURE BOY
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16-01-2008 14:34 |
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Tomos
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Lovely start. Yeah, Shpongle vibes at the start and ya canny argue with that.
Amazing melodies man! This track has got me turning up the volume! Nice thumping beat, definately a body mover and a head spinner.
I recognise that drum loop at the very beginning - I'm currently using it in a dubstep. Nice isn't it.
You gotta finish this baby. It's soo sweet and melodic. Loved it all the way through. Wish there was more dnb like this.
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16-01-2008 19:25 |
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kaliyuga
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like the intro and break, could kick in abit better, i like the kick in tho sounds all good. i like this track my type of dnb.
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17-01-2008 13:43 |
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Seven Gun
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lovely clean feel straight from the start.
beat drops.... niiiice. chunky and delicious!!
drop is nice but could be a tiny bit shaper with the bass.
the mixdown is full on pro imo.
what software did you use for this tune?
not too much else to say.
excellent work.
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17-01-2008 16:36 |
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djphrenzy
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*nudge*
can has review of new version?
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1. Two Sawtooth Waves
2. Detune first wave +9%
3. Detune second wave -9%
4. ???
5. Profit!
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