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dip_registered dip_registered is a male
Benx


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Please check out my new track 'The Host (Finished) *preview only* ' and post your comments here!!!

Please let me know what you think, i want to make it good!

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15-01-2008 06:45 Homepage of dip_registered
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Good improvements...

Please post 1 track/week only.
It would be a good idea to remove the previous version now.

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15-01-2008 11:56 Homepage of BattleDrone
dip_registered dip_registered is a male
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sorry mate, my mistake!! how do i delete?? i was lookin all over for a button...=S...u seem to be the only guy alive in this place

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15-01-2008 17:15 Homepage of dip_registered
Tomos Tomos is a male
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Nice tune but it sorta runs out of steam pretty quickly, especially from about 1.29 onward. That bass is a bit dull and repetitive. I would install a whole new bassline to replace it. Perhaps incorporate some of those bass stabs that play during the intro? Also, the beats are too standard for my liking. You need to make them work harder, more twists and turns, more exotic patterns. Sound quality wise I can't fault it. Everything sounds great through my headphones.

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15-01-2008 19:16 Homepage of Tomos
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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I can delete your tune (the other one) if you want me to.

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15-01-2008 19:57 Homepage of BattleDrone
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my first review!

didnt really like the beat at the start but as the tune gets in it does really fit. but maybe it needs more to it, it seems to lack energy.

the bassline is pretty cool but does get a bit repetitive and maybe needs a secound drop so it splits it up a bit.

production wise it sounds great IMO

bascially, i wouldnt turn it off lol
15-01-2008 20:11
dip_registered dip_registered is a male
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quote:
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I can delete your tune (the other one) if you want me to.


that would be sick! cheers.

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16-01-2008 00:36 Homepage of dip_registered
dip_registered dip_registered is a male
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It seems as though my beats need work.... and i like the idea of the second drop....

I quite like the bass, the reason the beats arent very energetic is because when the bass and beats are merged it creates that 'jumpy' feeling.

If the beats had more twists and turns im sure the track wouldn't be as 'boring', i dont really wanna lose my bassline though. Maybe more progressive sounds could be introduced after the drop (a few are) and just build on them.

I'm trying to create an older 2001 'renegade hardware' sound, minimal but not boring. I want it jumpy, but i just cant get the beats right. Turst me, ive tried shit but the bass never sounds as good with it. Maybe introduce a second snare for a few breaks after the drop...

Thanks for commenting!!! i always find its good to write shit down. I'm glad u like the sound quality & production, at least i got something right.

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I'm gunna go listen to some Usual Suspects, start putting my head in some beats.

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16-01-2008 02:52 Homepage of dip_registered
2clix 2clix is a male
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The intro makes me sing hey mickey in my head ahhhh lol im stuck in the 80s wormhole today...

Neways, nice production skills overall you could use some drum edits in this mother, and make that bass a little dirtier, needs a second drop as well. Think this is your 2nd go at your first tune here, I look forward to hearing you progressBig Grin

peace bruv

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16-01-2008 08:53
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reminds me of a heist style of drop. snare could be a tad louder. vibes are there but the track seems to be a little bare. could do with a little switch up. nice work tho mate. big ups

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16-01-2008 14:40 Homepage of CULTURE BOY
cheezdotville cheezdotville is a male
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This track is pretty ace. I think you need to dirty up the bass a bit and layer the snare with a more crackier one and then compress the shit outta it. The beat seems to stumble along and the drop doesn't hit me in the face like i want it to. Maybe make each note in the the melody longer to get a less broken feeling. Sub work! the bass line isn't effective enough so maybe some eqing of the sub would help. Anyways, you know what i've said about this track before, big ups! keep it rolling mofo.
17-01-2008 07:34 Homepage of cheezdotville
D2o D2o is a male
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Liking this from the off..

Beats a pretty nice. although the snare is lacking the certain something.
Like all the edits and effects here and there.
liking that eerie sound.
that bass being filtered in sounds nice.

Drop was a tad empty. This has got some old skool jump style to it before things got too wobbly for my liking.

Good lilttle edits etc as it goes along. nice

all in all a nice little tune you got here mate, bigups Bigup

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17-01-2008 10:05 Homepage of D2o
kaliyuga kaliyuga is a male
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nice intro, kick in well well old school.
17-01-2008 13:55
dip_registered dip_registered is a male
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cool!! well it seems i have some ideas to run with...im stoked some of u find it oldschool, and believe in every tip u've given me. Thanks a million!

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17-01-2008 16:14 Homepage of dip_registered
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