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collective
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Registration Date: 28-11-2006
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Please check out my new track 'zero 34' and post your comments here!!!
ok another one for today sorry for posting two in a week but well i havent posted for a while so cut me some slack
here is a snippet of a new track by me an mister illmpotive for you to listen to only a snippet so any feed back welcome
__ did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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11-01-2008 21:27 |
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Tomos
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Two posting on the same day? Tut, tut, naughty boy.
This is seriously good stuff. Sounds excellent from start to first. Really fat, loads of warm sub, good levels, clean sounds... it's all there. I don't think you'll get any criticisms for this one. I've gone none myself, it's excellent.
Finish it please and re-post!!
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12-01-2008 10:11 |
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Nick ZZ
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Maybe work the intro to make it a little deeper
Decent mixdown
Drumz are solid
The pads can come up a tad as well as the vocal FX
The static vocal sample feels a bit out of place, but that could just be me being over critical. Cheers brutha. Z
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12-01-2008 14:22 |
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Glim
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Sweet beatz, tight, equed well too..
Cool intro so far bruv..
Nice snare..
How do you get it to sound like theres so much space in this track.. those lush pads sound as if they're miles away
, nothing colliding with each other at the mo.. nice bass too.. hihats a bit too loud imo..
Fuck this sounds real pro.. Driving home from an after party kinda track imo...
Would be great as a soundtrack to a film without doubt..
Nothing bad to comment on this little gem, nice work would like to hear a full version
Cheers
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12-01-2008 18:12 |
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BattleDrone
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Sounds really clean, I would have liked a low-mid bass element as well. There's no main theme yet, it's more a Dnb sound carpet now.
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13-01-2008 23:18 |
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illmotive
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
Sounds really clean, I would have liked a low-mid bass element as well. There's no main theme yet, it's more a Dnb sound carpet now. |
Dnb sound carpet now ... lol whats one of them m8 ...cheers for the comment man .. not to blow my own trumpit man how long you been produceing for???... coz me checked a few of your tune m8 and they sounded realy synthy and flat ... nice one man any how big ups..
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14-01-2008 00:24 |
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collective
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huum thats a good comment illmotive
i lkie your view point a mid rang bass hey???? now that wouldnt be done really seeing as its a deep fucking tune!!!!
but yeah id like to hear some shit from the battle drone as he has ll these points of veiw but you know he dont post many tunes!!!!!
i mean i only been going a year now in production time so id like to hear how long he has been going and has anyone even had an intrest in some of stuff....
now not to blow you MR illmotive but havent tech itch and people like that played your shit out!!! correct me if im wrng and hasnt johnny jungle been played by the infamous DJ SKJITTY and cant people get a hold of that tune? and that set some where
so battle drone if you want to step up to the challenge im sure we could ahve a little produce off and get peoplr to judge themselves!!!!!!! if not then shut the fuck up!!!!
__ did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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14-01-2008 00:31 |
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Lightningflash
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drum petterns a bit to safe for me, love those long echoy pads.
is the low end bass volum up a bit???
I can hear it on the kik and the bass.
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14-01-2008 02:20 |
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Binary Havoc
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EZ
Hows tricks?
This is sweet guys
Proper nice roll to the b line, crisp drums, great washy pads
Top notch preview, big potential
Finished version should be cool, look forward to hearing it
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14-01-2008 19:28 |
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Seven Gun
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Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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lovely jubbly.
nice easy vibes.
i could grind down to this i think.
mix is very good.
could possibly do with a bit more going maybe.
i like your work.. keep it up.
__ "When you lose, dont lose the lesson"
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17-01-2008 16:46 |
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