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collective
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Registration Date: 28-11-2006
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Please check out my new track 'broken heart' and post your comments here!!!
k little 64 bar roll out here of summat i came up with this morning just straight into it no intro staraight mid part of the tune
havea listen only short clip enjoy
__ did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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11-01-2008 15:02 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Loud! (Maybe too loud...)
Yep, cool little funky number. I like it. Defo potentional to develop this melody further. Good levels, crisp beats, good range of sounds. Work on it bro.
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11-01-2008 18:58 |
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BattleDrone
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Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Your stuff seems to sound very pro all the time, but your tracks lack story, there's no hook or anything more then beats to get the crowd going. You say there's no intro, but to me this IS the intro and the track has to start after it.
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Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
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13-01-2008 23:21 |
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collective
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Registration Date: 28-11-2006
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yeah im working on it man
my stuff sounds pro? why thank you my freind i work hard at getting it to sound alright to start with,
yeah it has no intro orr nothing as what you hear here is only if i rember about hor an halfs work, im still doing bits to
but yeah your right it lacks a hook at the mo so when i done it more i will re post it
but ta for the advice much appreciated
__ did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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14-01-2008 00:05 |
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Lightningflash
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Registration Date: 25-07-2005
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nice clear drum mix fantastik.
cant you stick some edits in now and then on the drus???
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14-01-2008 02:11 |
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