 kaliyuga - True Flame |
kaliyuga 
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Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'True Flame' and post your comments here!!!
HOpe u like let us know what u think, all feed back is welcome, enjoy!
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08-01-2008 16:08 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Good FX in the intro... Drums are a bit to repetitive in the intro for my taste.
The lead instrument is very sharp edged, you might want to lowpass it a little, in the current mixdown it is eating the space of the hihats, ghosts and percussion.
The breakdown is really sudden and unexpected, the buildup is nice.
The many little breakdowns throughout the track are not good for a dancing audience, should be more continuous.
I hear talent, but it needs some work.
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08-01-2008 17:18 |
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OBLIVION12
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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id bop to this on the dance floor mate, quality love the way it builds up! love those eerie synths, bit more drum variation would be cool
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08-01-2008 17:52 |
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CLARKFADER
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nice track mate , keep it up !!!!!!
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09-01-2008 13:54 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Overall, a cool tune. Got a nice general sound to the whole thing - good levels, rollin beats, nice SFX coming in and out, good bass... can't find much to fault really. My only problem is that the bass doesn't do enough to keep it interesting for 6.30 minutes. You need something else in there which is gonna bring the whole thing to life - maybe a high pitched synth melody or another mid-range bassline. It's just missing that extra melody, imo. But nice tune mate, you got skillz.
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09-01-2008 19:15 |
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Lightningflash
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Registration Date: 25-07-2005
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sounds so simple
Id haveto put something intricat in there maybe on the HI HAT.
some mellowdy for peps to lock on to.
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10-01-2008 00:12 |
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Binary Havoc
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Registration Date: 25-07-2007
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Enjoyed overall, breaks are pretty good but a bit smothered by the bass synth and could generally do with being a bit more prominent.
Like the FX , work well.
Peace
BH
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10-01-2008 10:39 |
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kaliyuga
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Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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thanks 4 the comments, all is taken on broad, always good to hear what others think.
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11-01-2008 13:28 |
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