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Lightningflash Lightningflash is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Warnnig Warning, unfinished.' and post your comments here!!!

Iv tryed a differant MP3 converter on this one, soething went wrong with my last efforts, they sounded ok untill I converted them, tell me if this is better.
thanx for listenng.

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07-01-2008 00:21
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heavy heavy heavy

like the style deep dynamic ect n nice heavy bass two gel together nice

good drums i like the stuttas very subtle cool
sample : good

eq : good

wud like 2 hear full version nice tune
07-01-2008 00:36
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Intrroo is clean could do with some more warmth, voice sample is nice, and beats are very clean. That bass is a little too distorted or off key little
it sjust an intro i suppose, but production is getting better and better.
nnice one lightning much improveemnt

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Bassline sounds a bit uninspired and the choice of bass sound is not right for the track I think (it's off key too).
Drums could do better with some compression, they sound a little bit to weak, especially kick and snare could use a boost.

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07-01-2008 10:59 Homepage of BattleDrone
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A full sound to your production man. Track builds up very nicely indeed, lovely flow to it. Yeah, bass sounds a little out but nothing too bad, imo. Perhaps it's too crunchy for a track like this tho. I'd tend to go for a warmer, more liquid style bass.

Snare needs more beefiness and prominence. It's almost lost amongst all the other sounds. Shame really, cos a more powerful snare would definitely give the track extra drive.

Definitely got your own style here bro - big ups for that. Enjoyed it.

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09-01-2008 18:51 Homepage of Tomos
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thanks for the help, Iv certainly made the alterations cos I do agree with your observations.
a very useful thing this site.
Ill try to do the same for you,

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09-01-2008 21:59
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thanks for the help, Iv certainly made the alterations cos I do agree with your observations.
a very useful thing this site.
Ill try to do the same for you,


Cheers bud.

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09-01-2008 22:00 Homepage of Tomos
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great feeling from this tune, very mellow intro. the
bass lets it down after the first drop. its just sounds too false too me or maybe it just dont go.
however it does say unfinished dont it.good structure you have there already, imo a one min intro is long enough for any track.
im likin the melody and the choir type synth you got going on there all in all, a good listen. sort out that bass though it just dont go.
thanks for the listen m8!
11-01-2008 03:01
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Nice start man..

Proves you don't always need percussion or hihats right from the start..

Cool beats that come in, rolling i like the snare, and the ride cymbals combine well, that bass is sick bruv, bit too loud in the mix, makes it actually better in a way but could do with being tamed a little..
The tune has a dreamy backdrop -sad, and that bass makes me feel like something nasty is round the corner, like alerting me to the danger ahead.. Devil Crying Devil

Oh fuck it finished, i honestly thought it was about to explode then.. make sure it does!!

I would very much like to hear the full version of this did you ever get round to finishing it, i hardly ever do with my tracks..


Cheers, keep working on this one bruv

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13-01-2008 15:25
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