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Registration Date: 10-08-2006
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Please check out my new track 'lizz to hizza' and post your comments here!!!
w'sup d&b.be, it's been a while
well ehm... i remixed from love to hate quite a bit.. have a lot on my mind regarding my studies, and this one flew out between the books and paper..
kinda techy i suppose.. i dunno please have a listen and tell me what to fixe etc.. thx peepz.
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05-01-2008 03:54 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Reverb on snare, bad thing.
Drums could use some more muscle.
Melodies sound like going nowhere, cut down on melodies.
Too much stereo going on.
Did you set your stereo image on the master channel? I'd rather not do that as it puts the bass and the drums in stereo too.
Choice of synths is to standard imo. They need an edge.
It overal sounds like rock without guitars, not DnB.
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06-01-2008 15:23 |
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tryptech
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Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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aal sounds are okee, its ust your mastering process that needs to grow
always remember, elctronic music is all about the master, how more minimal yuore going how beter youre gonna eed to master
little too much reeverb onteh drums
drums dont need much reeverb cuz they have already their own reeverb going on while recorded.Main Bass and drums need certainly to be in the middle of your stereo image.
snare needs some more middle frequencies, little weak
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06-01-2008 15:39 |
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OBLIVION12
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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well here goes, pretty good melodies throughout. the break at 6.15 roughly is a bit out, its certainly all there,just need too tweek eq levels, keep it up
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06-01-2008 20:43 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, like the peeps are saying, too much reverb and stereo on the beats. Never a good idea to use too many effects on the beats the whole way though a track. Bass definitely needs turning up. The really dominant element during the first half of the track is the snare - that's not a good thing. There's definitely a general lack of sub and bassiness.
I love the synth around 3.30, that filtering effect and melody. Very cool but needs some more synths in there to make the melody sound bigger. Very cool edits around the 4.30 mark.
Track progresses much better later on. The melodies are just cooler and more interesting.
Nice one ol' pal. Keep working the mixdown.
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09-01-2008 18:25 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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What to fix.. Hmm okay..
Well the percussion at the start is that filtered?? very tinny sounding, would be a bit better with more mids.. and maybe the arrangement of the percussion would be better, sounds as if its going faster than it really is.. like being rushed??..
Snare is a bit too clean.. but the eq of the beats is good imo..
Maybe extend the intro.. everything is introduced a bit too quicley.. Kick could be a bit too overpowering..
There sounds like there is so much work gone into thios man,, loads of variation is that a sign of boredom or intentional?.. i wish i put in half as much effort into my tunes as this sounds as if it has had.. 
Loads of stuff goin on here..
I think as you start to bring in more elements keep an eye on the levels of your beats as they start to be drowned out by the synths..
Try adding another snare as the track builds..
Not a big fan of the clean digital sound which this track has written all over it..
A massive tune
Really enjoyed listening to it mate
Cheers
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