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wrm
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Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Systolic murmur' and post your comments here!!!
Still working on this one. Gotta add second drop etc. I am pretty pleased with it so far. Check it out
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04-01-2008 10:50 |
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Lightningflash 
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I like this
A few bum notes
THe vocale at the start is wrong sounding.
good stuff, would groov too if pist.
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04-01-2008 21:27 |
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lead:end
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Registration Date: 10-08-2006
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i kinda like this very much.. the intro is nice and pro-like imo, the echo's and fade on thos drums are nice.. the bassline is nice and melodic, little darkish tho still chill.. only the low notes of the bass are a bit faded.. love the vox and the switch of breaks.. it's nice!
finish this boy.. i dig
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05-01-2008 03:23 |
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Tomos
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Enjoyed the bass melody, cool beats, good structure, the mix sounds crisp... can't really find much to criticise at all. The only thing I'd suggest is to layer the main bass with some extra synths to give it a fuller and more dramatic sound. That's the one element which drives this whole track/preview, so it's gotta be really good, big and interesting!
Finish it! Got huge potential this. 
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05-01-2008 15:23 |
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wrm
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thx guys for comments! Apreciate!
2Tomos: the main bass already consists of 2 synths. Sounds quite good to me. Anyway I am still workin on it and the bass is gonna be fixed too a bit.
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05-01-2008 16:26 |
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Invent
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Registration Date: 03-09-2005
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interesting intro... i like the background effects and melodic sound in the back ground and the beat dropping is not bad... the main lead sounds a bit boring, the notes are fine but i think it could have some more eqing and a layer of a moving sound over it perhaps... maybe a little bit more mids it will make the mix sound more thick.. right now its kinda crunchy.. a lot of red also with the drums(as in mid highs).. unless of course this is the sound you want... its got potential.. i can tell its not finished yet.. i dont feel like it ever gets rolling very much however... i feel that a few ghost kicks kan also do a nice addition to the track. at a later point..
wel im not listening to it on monitors, however if you can make it sound cool on these speakers than it would definately sound cool almost anywhere!
overall good job..
peace
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05-01-2008 17:01 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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This starts of really well, intro is full of mystery, but the first instrument being played (at around 20") breaks this atmosphere a bit, maybe you should redo the buildup. Track fails to sound mean, dark, mysterious,... The lead sounds too basic and friendly and your melodies don't change that, it still is very middle-of-the-road. Not a bad track, just nothing that gets me all wild.
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06-01-2008 15:30 |
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