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Lightningflash Lightningflash is a male

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Please check out my new track 'IT' and post your comments here!!!

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tell me what you think
even if its very bad I don't care.
Im off to oz for a few months,
Be back in May.

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31-12-2007 01:12

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Some impressive drum work there. They sound very unique. Did you create them using single hits? The bass is too loud during the intro. Actually, the intro itself needs a lot more work to create some atmosphere and tension in preparation for the main sections. Bass sound is ok but is too standard for my liking. I really like the pads and strings in the background - perhaps you could incorporate them into the intro. Overall, a nice preview.

Edit: I've just noticed that the kick and bass are conflicting and distorting a little. They also seem to clash with the crash too.

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31-12-2007 10:13

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To much hihats going on in that drumline. They take up all of the high end. You should leave those hyperactive hats out and use only the rides.
Breakdown is a bit too empty.
It's a shame the rest of the track is damaged by those hihats as it sounds really good, dark atmosphere and it all seems to fit together very well.
Track has potential.

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01-01-2008 13:39

Lightningflash Lightningflash is a male

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thanx lads

I re;ly think I may be going a bit deff, thats possibly why I allwys over do the Hi and the low end.
still Ill see what I can do with this one Allears

Yes TOM the hole drum beat is all individual one shots, but I did copy the basic rythm from a track I head here, but by the time Id finnished with it, it was unrecognizable.

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02-01-2008 01:41

thechronic thechronic is a male

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Hmm it's a bit over the top, those snare rolls are making me nervous, and it's overcompressed.

Balance is not too good either.

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