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Sephiroth 
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Registration Date: 11-04-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Global Killa '08' and post your comments here!!!
howdy, been away from these forums for ages but have recently re-discovered my love for drum 'n bass,.
decided to re-work this track after a spell away from drum 'n bass, any suggestions for improving the mix?
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29-12-2007 19:34 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
Registration Date: 16-10-2004
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Unique start.. when that reece starts i can already see an improvement in your work since a while ago 
Cool melody, hmm.. maybe kick is too loud, good snare, hi hats could be louder to make the drums overall feel louder..
Ahh vocal panning.. good job.. 
Unconventional drop comes outta nowhere without a breakdown, good..
Okay the hjihats are now a bit too much loud or have too much high end on them, oh?- they're gone now??
0:51 - real nice variation with the bass n kick hits, liking that alot 
1:16 good to see the bassline changing, keeps it fresh..
1:24, i fuckin love that kinda change up/fill thing with the melody
, funnily enough the first time i heard it used was on Pendulum's Another Planet 
, - But anyway i really dig that change of the bass line, do it all the time on my tunes
3;15 - Nice change with the half-time beatz,, drops back into the well used Bassline, the tracks has alot of variation but retains a central theme which is good.
Overall i liked this, only real issues are with the eq of the beatz in places, the volume of the bassline is too over-powering in the first part of the track and the ending would be better with an end as opposed to fading out, buts its all imho..
Your definetly improving bruv, keep it up
Cheers
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29-12-2007 20:39 |
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tryptech
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Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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intro sound is nice 'macaber'
like the bass work
could be some deeper though
mix needs little more power
u can add a multiband compressor
the voice s niceee
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29-12-2007 23:35 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Pretty impressive stuff mate. You've definitely got a good hold on all the little elements of a dnb track - fills, edits, drops, breakdowns, etc. The only criticism I can make is that the main bassline got tiresome for me around the 4.20 mark. It would be nice to be hearing something different at that point. Also, perhaps the beats can be beefed up a bit.
But very nice track. Enjoyed it.
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30-12-2007 11:14 |
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Lightningflash
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kick not loud enough.
lil bit predictable but not bad.
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