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rockx
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Please check out my new track 'The shredder - Dealing drugs' and post your comments here!!!
Hey, working on a new track. Please give comments and pointers. Having some trouble with eq in fruity loops, dont know how to use it correctly.
Peace
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29-12-2007 14:30 |
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Tomos 
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This is definitely not dnb - it's more like house or something. Still pretty good tho. That snare really needs changing - it's almost inaudiable at times. It's got a real mushy sound. Also, you need to check your bass levels cos there's a distinct lack of bassiness throughout the track. It sounds like you're using a lot of compression? It doesn't sound good, try taking it off. The quiet parts are sounding as loud as the loud parts - that's not good imo. It takes all the dynamics out of it.
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29-12-2007 14:48 |
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rockx
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hey thx for your reply, I am not using any compression besides on the vocal. Where can i change the bass levels, or is this EQ? further more i havent mixed the track yet, i should mix it to louder and quiter pieces of the bass, any tips for mixing?
Greetz
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29-12-2007 15:12 |
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BattleDrone
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Those pads you are using sound a bit trance and the don't follow the drums very well, might want to quantise them also the pattern you play with them doesn't sound very DnB. Drumline needs work A LOT. Kick is drowning in that mid-bass you use. Snare sounds all over the place. The speed of the track is far to low for DnB.
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29-12-2007 19:02 |
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Sephiroth
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Bass sound is pretty good but doesn't seem to loop with the tempo properly, lol nice sample, not sure about those pads, could do with some effects to make them sound a bit more pleasing. Everything ended a bit abruptly as well, not really much structure, could be a good tune with some more work and structure, maybe some variations in drums and bass as well.
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29-12-2007 19:07 |
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tryptech
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nice sound
kick could do with some pumping compression jeah
euhm that bass i ssytruss
i used that a lot
would change it thuogh al little
everything sounds a little weak
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29-12-2007 23:30 |
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