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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves

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Please check out my new track 'working title 'pingu'...' and post your comments here!!!
Song I've just started, pretty rough demo. Probably never get finished like my others!!!
Merry xmas everyone.
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24-12-2007 14:06 |
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Tomos
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A little too much reverb during the main sections for my liking. It creates a big atmosphere but it kinda detracts from the other sounds. I recognise that little break ... I know it's a from a track on a MetalHeadz CD but can't put a name to it.
Love the dark, sinister vibes in this. Very MetalHeadzy. Some very interesting background sounds going on.
Definitely needs more evil bassness. It's lacking some growly, stabby sounds.
Nice track, enjoyed it.
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24-12-2007 16:04 |
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BattleDrone
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Bass is too silent... needs a more clear melodic structure imo, not much going on now. That noise with extreme stereo separation (near the end) is just an ear killer, nothing more, remove it.
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24-12-2007 20:32 |
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brucifer
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thanks for the comments.
It is a real rough experimental demo. Literally just started it. AS for the break, I know it as Mystery 7. I think it is a Digital one, so it could be on a headz track.
I have know idea what the stereo sounds like, I have a real dodgy gheto blaster set up. I know the last couple of bars have tonnes or reverb on them, but I didn't have time to cut em before I went to the pub last night! Sorry... I did this using Reason and it was taking a while to output the track last night and I didn't realised I had put the end where I had... Sorry again!
THanks again for your comment and have a fun Christmas/New Year
PS. Please don't drink and drive kids.
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25-12-2007 00:13 |
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26-12-2007 00:00 |
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liking the first drop that comes in, drums are programmed well, pretty crazy arrangement, track is nicely put together but sounds like it could do with a bit of cleaning up, everything just seems to be a bit over the place. sub bass is real good, nice and deep.
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30-12-2007 20:27 |
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brucifer
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Thanks for listening, The track Is a real rough 1st attempt. I have done a lot of changes to it, but it still needs more work doing to it.... I will upload a new copy shortly.
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03-01-2008 13:13 |
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Invent
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i think it needs quite a bit of work.. the ideas are nice but work a few weeks on it.. and i think you got something nice... i heard that some hihats were panned out of place and the reverb which has been already mentioned... i mean it could be a cool track but the structure is a little too much neglected so far to really make a jugement...
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03-01-2008 20:02 |
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brucifer
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Yeah, cheers invent. It does need some more work. I do need to sort the hats out. The timeing in one of the loops (Digital one, I think) is a bit off. MIght need to try eqing the hat out of it... I have a newer mix, but want to do a bit more work before I put it up.
Thank for giving it a listen
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03-01-2008 22:39 |
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