 muaddib - Hammer 'n' Sickle (UNFINISHED)  |
thechronic 
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Wow your tracks are really getting better and better!! 
Still a way to go though, but you're getting there!
In this preview I think the snare is a little to loud and the bass doesn't sound very good. It sounds very much like a pitched down sample, very gritty but it needs more beef. For basses it's IMO usually better to use virtual analog synth plugins instead of samples, try generating a phat bassline in rebirth or something similar and using that.
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12-01-2004 20:32 |
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Needs some work on the sound indeed...
Like the break with the Kick and bass only...
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12-01-2004 23:23 |
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Phazzy
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I actually think the bass is good.. although it is hard to follow in the first few seconds
The snare on 21seconds fucking killed me.... i listened to it on (loud) headfones and its blatently too loud!
Other than that its good though... im glad its unfinnished because i think it has good potential.
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13-01-2004 14:23 |
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Emblem-X
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hmm not feeling this.. samples don't blend into a solid breakbeat..
bassline ain't really surprising.. on the edge of boring
heard some nice ideas tho! espacially during the switches between partsin the song.
try to get those beats right! that might improve a lot!
make the hats snappier, layer the snare with some other try to get some variation.
like the way the bassdrum was done.. pumping!
keep it up man!
cheerz
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13-01-2004 16:12 |
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djdred
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nice work bro!!!
Keep on rockin u r gettin there, like it alot!!!!
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14-01-2004 07:39 |
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Muad'Dib
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Thanx for the reviews...
now, onto tech stuff.. :
Fixed:
Snares -> downgraded a little, the volume down...
Bassline -> changed the bass ... it was not a sample in the first place, but it still sounds that way.. so I've created new one with TS404 fruity sound creator....
Also, in the second part of the tune, the bass in background is made with 3xosc...
The bassline now has more variations in the preview part of the track (first 2 mins)...
Hats -> Made 'em snappier wth adding another hat in the same box-time as the old ones...
I juz wait for thecronic to delete the preview, so I can upload the right one...
Again, THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH for your previews!
thanx to djdred 'n' Phazzy 
Thanx bro'z!
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14-01-2004 13:08 |
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Surya
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Bassline is messy indeed. Sounds like it clips, but it doesn't
Snare is indeed too loud.
Melody of the bassline is a bit simple and might become boring in a feature lenght track
Looking forward to the new version!
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15-01-2004 15:25 |
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thechronic
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Muaddib has uploaded the complete version of this track!! Check out this thread!!
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