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OBLIVION12 
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Junction' and post your comments here!!!
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19-12-2007 21:27 |
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BattleDrone
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The structure of this track could use some work, it seems to move in various directions. Lots of good elements really, but I'm not sure if you can combine everything into a good song. I'm pretty sure you could make 2 or 3 good tracks out of this amount of ideas.
Mix sounds quite muddy, break needs a layer to get it flowing.
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20-12-2007 00:44 |
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D2o
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20-12-2007 11:40 |
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OBLIVION12
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thanks for the review, up until now i havent been using midi coz i havent had a keyboard, ive got one now so the melodys from the synths etc will be better in my tunes from now on, i was determined to use that vocal! i should of dropped it coz i know it dont fit but it took me ages to cut it up so i was deffo gunna use it lol
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20-12-2007 11:51 |
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CLARKFADER
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hi mate , liked the begining , nice ideas again , but still u need to boost up the levels on the beats , i agree with the others about all the different ideas , sounds like a few different tracks in 1 , theres a fx sample in 5:17 needs turning down , this would sound nice out , needs work , but nice , peace !!!
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20-12-2007 13:02 |
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OBLIVION12
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thanks im having trouble coz all my tracks seem to sound muddy, maybe its my soundcard which is just an audigy2 and also a lack of knowledge on what fx i should use on certain samples. i will slowly learn the hard way with time! cheers 
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20-12-2007 13:10 |
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20-12-2007 13:26 |
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Tomos
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Nice synth work in the build-up, sounds very ambient and Orb-like. Yeah, them vocals don't really fit but you know that already.
The bassline at 2.50 is on the right lines but the sound is pretty mashed up. Needs more clarity and EQing. In fact, the whole mix is pretty muddy.
Beats are ok but they need to be turned up a bit.
I like the melodies in this tho. Quite unusual for a dnb track.
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21-12-2007 18:18 |
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Seamless
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Registration Date: 22-12-2007
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That intro was way, way, WAY too long. I measure when the track actually gets "going" when the bass actually feels like it's oscillating my speakers and that doesn't seem to happen until around 2:55.
I do like the sounds that were in the ambient beginning. You seem to have quite the handle on the background stuff.
The drums, I feel, could have had more of a presence. Do the drums actually get quieter when the bass comes in? I don't quite get the motive behind that.
I feel this track has potential all over it. Feels like an unfinished thing to me that bears rehashing and re mastering.
It could fare just fine with the huge into. I could very well be the only person on Earth who'd rather have it get into it in the first 10 seconds ;p
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22-12-2007 07:13 |
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) or some selective eq.
