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philbee 
Future beats for the streets
Registration Date: 18-10-2006
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Please check out my new track 'flesh-wound' and post your comments here!!!
easy peeps
just alil preview of a track im workin on
justa dayz work so dont know about the eq in on it as
yet....
went for a more live drum feel on this one
kinda more dancefloor focused tune
techy/neuro/dancefloor vibe
dirty bass..
enjoy..
anyfeedbac recieved gratefully and gracefully..
peace to da dotbee massive...
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19-12-2007 01:44 |
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Binary Havoc
Binary Havoc
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EZ Phil
I like the elements here but don't know if they gelling together right atm.
Think you right to comment about the eq, beats are a bit muddy at the mo and it sounds though the kick might be distorting a little. Beat itself is solid though.
Think that the drop could come a bit sooner and much preferred the tune after the drop where the techy bass takes over.
A good start with loads of potential but not up to your normal very high standards for me atm.
Serves you right for knockin out high quality tunes all the time innit 
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19-12-2007 07:09 |
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Tomos
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EZ now big man, haven't heard from ya in a while.
My immediate thought was that kick sounds distorted. And it gets worst after the drop at around 1.32. The same thing is happening to the snare. But I know you ain't EQed it yet.
Cool bassline. Definitely got big groove potential. A little quiet at the mo.
Nice little fills and edits with the beats and bass.
Synth melody - yeah, pretty good. Needs some extra tho to take it from bring ok to great.
Agree with BH - not your best, but good to see another tune from ya.
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19-12-2007 08:46 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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The track starts with some FX mixed in which make it sound distorted (as you don't know the regular feel of the track yet). Drums sound really "on the edge" when it comes to compression, I would lower it just a tad, especially the kick has to much high end because of the compression.
Intro is a bit long for my taste. You create a nice vibe in the intro, but that vibe doesn't seem to last throughout the mainpart.
The bass could do with more sub action (I'm on dirt cheap headphones here, so could be missing the point).
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19-12-2007 11:10 |
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CULTURE BOY
v v v iv a record missing
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19-12-2007 21:12 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
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hi philster!!the sub is a bit to strong.look at the final wave file and if the track looks really choppy its because the subs are just a touch to dominating.dude the lil break filltro/intro to the main bar is sick!!! i like where your headed bro it sounds great just a bit to much sub bass.maybe cut out the drums instead of letting the one drum beat play at the beginning.other than that sounding good mang.
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20-12-2007 05:36 |
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cynik
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from the top
sounds heavily limited - but as you said its a days work
like the teebeeism when it drops.. soudns something he and calyx would cook up together...
the sound needs improving but Im liking it so far
keep at 
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21-12-2007 07:59 |
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Seamless
Producer
Registration Date: 22-12-2007
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I'm not quite sure how far into a crit I should get seeing as you're still working on it. I, also, am not sure about your EQ on that. The major distortion drum had it's charm right up until the bass came in and had what seems like the same distortion. Is it a master dist?
The bass sounds like it would be top notch stuff minus the distortion. I dunno.
Throw in all kinds of high end background noise n stuff. Cymbals, high hats, screaming ambient dissonance. stuff like that. you've definitely got the spectrum space based on what you've got here. all low end and mid range
tho, playing it on most club systems would yield mostly bass and mid range so, maybe you're just thinking ahead ;]
I dig the concept.
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22-12-2007 07:24 |
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