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Halph-Price 
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'The Wolf Comes with a Smile 
' and post your comments here!!!
This deserves to be one fo the top tracsk of this week be cause, ti's a full track not a fucking preview.
Enjoy
with that said, I love you guys, have been working ona bucnh of shit latly, but having to deal with mo girlz latly. but now i'll have some more trax up soon. thanks to all that listned and thanks to anyone that tookt eh tiemt o scribble some text about this track too.
i see theres a lot fo new people on the board. i'll try to get mroe reviews going on here for you guys.
This track was inspired by Brotherhood of the Wolf
and little red riding hood.
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18-12-2007 05:50 |
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Rudeone
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diggin this one! i have some mix issues though. sounds too overloaded to me. even in the breakdowns. i only have headphones but maybe some of the pads are too wide. the lead sounds are pretty dominant. id let the bass roll first and let the leads come in a bit laters. also the bass woiuld do good with more warmth/sub imo. drums are ok, snare doesnt come through too good maybe.
cheers halph, enjoyed this one!
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18-12-2007 09:58 |
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Halph-Price
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varaiety is the spice of life, i did many mixes for this song, this is one of the better ones.
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18-12-2007 20:48 |
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Nick ZZ
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19-12-2007 06:32 |
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Binary Havoc
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Scary intro dude, very dark.
Good work on the beat programming, lots of variation and builds nicely for the drop at 1:36 which is good. The reesey bass there is a bit too midrange for me.
Drops again at 2:45 but quite tame this time. Think it would work better with the 2nd drop bigger than the 1st.
Mix wise everything is sounding pretty good although maybe the beats generally could come up a little? They seem to be competing with the piano a bit too much.
Good work generally, enjoyed
Peace
BH
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19-12-2007 07:39 |
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Halph-Price
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you're exactly right, piano is a bit louder then drums and the second drop i didn't add , thanks, kinda forgot i guess
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02-01-2008 17:24 |
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cynik
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oh damn , the wolf. at first I thought its another 300 thing 
starts off promissing, love the intro beats
1:44 the drums are overdistorted
a lot of offkey stuff, the piano is driving me nuts. I'd leave it in only in the transitional parts
bassline could use more bass
alltogether not a bad tune, apart from the piano stuff
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02-01-2008 18:41 |
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Halph-Price
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oh hell i could still make this song into a 300 thing, thanks, i was actually trying to get a howl done up like the one in 300, i didn't even realize it...... haaa ......
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14-01-2008 17:45 |
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cynik
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15-01-2008 00:03 |
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darkstar
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I have to agree with Tomos here,
This track has good potential at the beginning.
The drop back in ruined it for me. The drums are soft.
The intensity is lost from then on. Good track mate, but ouch in the middle there.
As always, fabulous synth work.
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15-01-2008 02:24 |
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Halph-Price
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it's suppose to downgrade from intesity after the first drop, which is probably a mistake this song runs too short, the middle eight after the first drop should have another verse to carry some fo the intesity then build back up, and i can chagne the drums, i tried making them harder, they are far more distorted and sharper then the normal drums, i thought that would do it, but you guys are just so picky, i know how to fix it tho. longer build up and i'll replace the drums, thanks a bunch.
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15-01-2008 20:49 |
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Seven Gun
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intro is excellent, very good indeed.
you have a theatrical style that i have come to admire of late.
the drop needs some work as it sounds all too high mid imo.
i know that technically you know your stuff, but i have the feeling that you have the tendency to overproduce your tunes sometimes.
that said.. the atmosphere is class, the ideas are sound but the excecution could be better.
7 or 8 outta 10
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