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2clix 
Doctor Obvious
Registration Date: 17-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Caverns' and post your comments here!!!
Kinda just threw this together in the past couple days
its a mess right now but tell what ya think
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14-12-2007 23:25 |
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Binary Havoc
Binary Havoc
Registration Date: 25-07-2007
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Nice atmos in d intro. Break comes across as quite muffled. Like the blade sample works well. Bass is pretty solid just really need to sort the break out imo, really lack some high mid / top end.
Nice ideas though n could be a big tune
Peace
BH
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14-12-2007 23:45 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Mastering and levels need work, structuring is a bit confusing. After the second drop there is soo much going on that everything seems to be a big audio soup at times (4:30-4:55) try to cut off any freqencies that are not needed (e.g the very low end out of vocals, the sword Fx, the high end out of the bass,...) to make room. Spread all those stabs and things a bit more over time instead og playing them all in a timespan of 25 seconds.
Overal a bit weird track, but you are improving big time.
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15-12-2007 01:36 |
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2clix
Doctor Obvious
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Thanks B.D./B.H. I agree with said above just need some more time to work on it, I'm still working on basic structure issues with everything I do along with all the other aspects, but in do time I think I can make things interesting with my ideas cause god knows I have too many! All in good time my bruvas 
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15-12-2007 02:16 |
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CLARKFADER
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i see what u`r trying to do with this track , but it sounds all wrong , everythings in the right place most of the time but theres no bass where it supposed to be , lacks bass in the kik , that really needs sorting , if you heard this out ull`ed be asking u`r self , wheres the bass , it just wouldend sound right !!! got a bit messy toward the end , not 4 me im afraid , but dont be to discouraged , parts r nice in it , the beginning needs a lot of bass !!!!!!!!!!
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15-12-2007 13:20 |
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Tomos
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I'm really diggin some of your ideas here man (again!). Yeah, it's still pretty messy - both in terms of song structure and overall sound but you've got a decent basis from which to create a really cool track. I love how you make the bass and beats work really well together during the main sections. It's sound natural and fresh. You've definitely got a knack of how to construct basslines and beats.
Where this track faulters, imo, is during the last quarter. It kinda runs out of steam and lacks direction. It gets a bit messy. And like I said, the overal sound needs quite a bit of work yet ... but you told us that already.
I'm likin your stuff man. Glad you're on this website!
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15-12-2007 17:45 |
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Lightningflash
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if you can get this sounding right itll be a good listen.
get on the case man 
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18-12-2007 00:26 |
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collective
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Registration Date: 28-11-2006
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yeah man not bad effort
but like its been pointed out you need to start using frequinces better it gets all to much to crowded you need to stop them clashing all over the place.
you need to clear up the beats and bassline to be honest they dont have any bite at all
because other sounds are way to up front, dont worry bout structure yet though as you are still learning how to do things structure will with due course no point in getting song structure right if you cant do anything else imo
learn the basics the rest will follow
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18-12-2007 00:53 |
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