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OBLIVION12 
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Freedom' and post your comments here!!!
hi. Please Vote and review my new track,....... a couple of samples are from drum n bass.be's sample archives, which is great! If you like it! vote for it! Big Up :-).............
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13-12-2007 18:37 |
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CLARKFADER
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i like it mate , but needs more , lacks oomth ,nice ideas , i think the drum beat needs to be more harder , needs alot more bass in it , dident like the bass drum skip to much , wasnt bad thou !!!!!! i like the breakdowm , nice , 1 of the wobble basses was a bit to loud , nice feel to it all , keep it up mate , peace !!!!!!!!!
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13-12-2007 21:51 |
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OBLIVION12
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more oomth! lol, My pc needs more oomth! my pc is letting me down as i have a lack of cpu power so im finding things like final adjustments hard coz i cant playback what im making without the track jumping erratically lol,
I will try to give it more oomth! Look forward to hearing your next tune
Thanks for your comment
Glenn
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14-12-2007 00:30 |
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CLARKFADER
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Originally posted by OBLIVION12
more oomth! lol, My pc needs more oomth! my pc is letting me down as i have a lack of cpu power so im finding things like final adjustments hard coz i cant playback what im making without the track jumping erratically lol,
I will try to give it more oomth! Look forward to hearing your next tune
Thanks for your comment
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yeah , i simpathise with you mate , i had that shit for 3 years , my first computer sposed to of had 256 ram but for some reason i was only getting 224 , i could only have 12 channels and if i was using acid with the vst`s it would slow down like f**k , stopped me from progressing man , but i got a new 1 with 1 gb ram , alot better , handles things nicely but i`ve only got 40 gb memory so that gets in the way as well , i have everything on my external hardrive , including programs so when u install it all the files they go onto the external and u dont clog up your main computer and stops you from getting viruses on u`r sample n shit !!!!!!!!
keep at it mate , think about getting a new computer , it will help in the long run and u`ll find it easyer to do what u need , computers r well cheap now , or get 1 from ebay or something , thats where i got my 1 from just make shore u get the right spec , mine cost me £150 !!!!!!!!!!
anyway im just finishing off tune today , im uploading it later , hope to hear u`r review , peace !!!!!!!!!
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14-12-2007 15:02 |
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BattleDrone
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Drums need some ghost notes to get them rolling. Drumline needs more energy. Keep basses mono.
Nice mixture of basses, those patterns could do with some tweaking to make it all more rolling.
Some sounds (esp. those high arps, synths and sound F
don't really fit the feel imo, the overall feel is pretty dark, but those things sound like dutch trance. You're improving too, just like the other peeps that recently joined.
Would like to remix this.
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15-12-2007 01:47 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, definitely lacking oophm. There's a distinct lack of bass and sub frequencies. The basslines sound very quiet and a bit flat - same with the beats.
Got a very trancey feel because of the synth patterns. Not usually my style but I like what you're doing here. The melodies sound good.
Keep it going mate. 
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15-12-2007 18:04 |
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Lightningflash
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i can see you got the idea
sounds like youll be good after a bit of time and experience.
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16-12-2007 00:37 |
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quash
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Registration Date: 16-02-2005
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listening to the track as i write, i'm dyslexic so if the spellig & gramma's roapy then my apologies. like the track alot, a nice clean sound and liking the use of the martin luthar king sample. what did you write in in may i ask. only thing i'd say is there's not much variation in the drumz, there could be some more percussion added as the tune goes on but good bass sounds all the same.
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18-12-2007 14:50 |
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OBLIVION12
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
Posts: 80
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allright mate thanks! im using making waves as a sequencer, i find its easy for me to get ideas down quick, you are right about the drums, some more variation will make it more interesting! im trying to do that now on my next tune all the best
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18-12-2007 15:55 |
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