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Paracyte 
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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Please check out my new track 'no title yet' and post your comments here!!!
elo massive .be just a prev of new one kinda ol skool flow ,mc will rap to this one ,all feedback appreciated.
bigups.
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11-12-2007 20:57 |
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CLARKFADER
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yeah it is quite old skool isnt it , like it nice , keep going with it , bit kinda commercial which could be a bit of a disadvantage thou , but overall nice !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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11-12-2007 21:17 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Lead synth should be some kind of Rhodes-like sound to fit better in that atmosphere (which is otherwise superb). Little to no bassline other than the lead.
The snare has a bit too much colour for my taste, might want to layer and EQ it a bit, it sounds too "rock" now. The panning of the lead should be used more subtle and not all the time.
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11-12-2007 21:45 |
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Lightningflash
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 25-07-2005
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first piano sound needs more release and is a bit woodn, I usualy put a note slightly out here and there to give a feel of realness.
this is one of myn useing a piano
http://www.mp3unsigned.com/showmp3.asp?mp3id=51007
Id use a much simpler riff for the sax.
nice drop good feeling.
snare seems a bit distant and drums need a quick break now and then.
good prev ok
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12-12-2007 01:06 |
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Tomos
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Not really my kinda style but I do like the track when the bass comes in. Go easy on the old panning mate cos panning a main backbone-element like the bass can make it uncomfortable and disorientating to listen to.
Some of the frequencies during the middle part need looking at. Of course, it's early days yet but I think the low-sounding piano is conflicting with the bass a bit. You might wanna seperate and define them both some more. Also, some of the piano chords sound out of tune with the bass. That's probably caused by a single key in the chord that is out of key with the bass scale.
Yeah, snare is too flappy for me. Needs to tighten up and also be louder. I love how the beats filter at the start tho. Really nice sound.
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12-12-2007 18:39 |
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Binary Havoc
Binary Havoc
Registration Date: 25-07-2007
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Piano is just the hardest thing to get sounding right. The piano here is ok, pattern is nice sound itself could be better and maybe needs a bit more variation in the velocity of the notes.
Bass is a really nice part but the panning needs to be toned down a little IMO.
Decent start though man, so keep at it.
BH
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12-12-2007 19:12 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
Registration Date: 08-11-2006
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wow dude your fucking tracks sound great now.like top fucking notch bro 
excellent melody and progression.maybe when the piano drops out the bass could have more movement to the filter or something.try routing another channel to run under the main bass line that has like a slighty sweeping bandpass.really i dont know what else to say its sounding great.maybe puta guitar going wha chika wha wha lmao when the piano drops out.i dunno good stuff though!!
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