 kaliyuga - Path Ways Of Dark Matter |
kaliyuga 
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Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Path Ways Of Dark Matter' and post your comments here!!!
lookin 4 feed back on mix levels n structure
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11-12-2007 14:11 |
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CLARKFADER
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hi mate , like this alot , needs a bass line at the begining thou , nice structure , love the reverse bass n stuff , nice roller as goes on , everythings nice but get some heavy bass in parts , would be so much better as the start just needs that extra edge !!!!
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11-12-2007 14:23 |
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BattleDrone
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Intro is too long, it builds up very well, but because it is so lengthy the tension is kinda reduced. The break you use in the main part is to much stereo (sounds a bit to the left) and imo a bit too silent. Try to center it more and make it a bit more dominant, the track will benefit from it.
Don't overdo it with the vocals, in the end they get boring. After the drop nothing new happens, please introduce some new element(s). Track is overall too long imo.
Overall this is great material for a killer track though.
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11-12-2007 16:19 |
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Tomos
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BattleDrone has perfectly summed up everything I was gonna say about this track. The intro is definately too long, I reckon you could take a quarter off it no probs. Bassline is good but I think the beats could work a bit harder. They sound a slack and lazy. They need more edgyness.
But yeah, a wicked tune!!! I really love the dark vibes. Glad you're on the website mate. 
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11-12-2007 19:05 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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the Kaliyuga, long time, mix level's sound tight, but me don't know ebough bout mix level's to feedback this, mix way outta my fuckn league, shuffly beat's are top notch, maybe bring them up a tiny bit, vocal's only add in the best of way's, suttle, effective structure imo, sounds dutty, tunes a treat, cheers.
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13-12-2007 06:47 |
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kaliyuga
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hi guys tyvm 4 the comments, it all helped. 
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22-12-2007 22:30 |
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