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CLARKFADER
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Please check out my new track 'INTO DARKNESS' and post your comments here!!!

made this dark track on reason 3 , please review and rate !!!!!!!!


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08-12-2007 17:55
Shunyatta
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I really really like this track, I was searching somethin that could be critisized, but I can't find anything :s love it as it is, great intro, quality mix, the first section of the track could have a slight dark melody flowin through, really subtle! Very good track Bigup
08-12-2007 18:29
cynik cynik is a male
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49 Vote(s) - Average Rating: 7.86

gripping intro

too much delay action for my tastes

not too keen on the organ introduced in the second part

otherwise nice beats, cool fx although some of the sweeps get overused. daaark bass Devil

sometimes too much fx action, the track looses its coherence, needs some dry parts imo

I like it Drummer

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08-12-2007 19:00 Homepage of cynik
hardplnsdrftr hardplnsdrftr is a male
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Intro is nice and spooky.

Excellent use of classic breaks in a very contemporary style. Old school meets new school sort of. Has a great John Rolodex/ Infamy/ Dub One type feel. Cool.

The reverb (I think) or other effect you have on the drums is diminishing their power IMO. I'd remove that effect or turn it down at least.

I'd like some harsh 808 bass stabs in their I think.

The mix isn't great & needs to be worked on a bit, could be better.

Good track. Nice ideas. Just tighten them up.

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09-12-2007 07:16 Homepage of hardplnsdrftr
OBLIVION12 OBLIVION12 is a male
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Yep its dark! yeah it has got an early metalheadz vibe to the track. when its cold outside this is the type of drum and bass i like to listen to. keep practicing and producing, you definitely have potential to produce a real spine chiller of a tune! big up!
09-12-2007 10:59
OBLIVION12 OBLIVION12 is a male
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44% ?? it deserves more than that!! i rated it good 3-4 stars!! pay no attention to that shit dude! i look forward to hearin some more
09-12-2007 11:08
brucifer brucifer is a male
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Sounds nice mate. There is a lot of echo on the bass, maybe try doing the same effect using volume controls. Really nice beats. Are they your own? Maybe put a rolling sub under them. Actually, I love this track. It's in a similar vein in what I try producing with Reason. LIke the synth thing around 4 min section. Is the base your own? I'm trying to make everything my own now when I'm using reason. Really nice mate. Thanks for putting this up. It's inspired me to unlock some more of Reason power. Happy

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09-12-2007 11:27
CLARKFADER
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cheers , i messed about with the rex beats n shit , subtractor bass , loved making this tune , thought i`lled get a better rating thou !!!!!!!

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09-12-2007 11:31
CLARKFADER
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Originally posted by OBLIVION12
44% ?? it deserves more than that!! i rated it good 3-4 stars!! pay no attention to that shit dude! i look forward to hearin some more


thanks 4 the comment mate !!!! i`m getting a bit pissed off man , i`ve had nothing but good feedback from this tune on this and other sites , someones got it in 4 me or something like that , haters man , i`ve heard worse stuff than this on this site and it gets a better rating than this tune , doesent make sence !!!!!!
09-12-2007 11:40
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Must admit, no idea why you got such a low rating. I gave you 4's all the way through. Think ya up to 71% now. I suppose some of the listeners were not in to this style and rated it poorly not looking at the prodution put into it Mad . I reckon its a wicked track still. Smile

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09-12-2007 12:11
CLARKFADER
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Originally posted by brucifer
Must admit, no idea why you got such a low rating. I gave you 4's all the way through. Think ya up to 71% now. I suppose some of the listeners were not in to this style and rated it poorly not looking at the prodution put into it Mad . I reckon its a wicked track still. Smile


Big Grin thanks again , i was well gutted when i see the rating Mad , i know it could be a bit better , needs tweaking here and there , but i never thought it would be rated so low !!!!!!!!!!Shocked
09-12-2007 12:55
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ya got some good ideas flowing around in there mate. not really my style of track but could see some peeps likein this type of track

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09-12-2007 17:39 Homepage of CULTURE BOY
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nice intro. deep.
although the main low synth/pad could do with some note changes here and there to roll it up and down.

beats are nice.
overall tho the tune is a touch plain and i lose interest later on.

could do with that low throb synth been more prominent and use the the beat switches as a guide to edit the synths around it and got nuts.

dont worry about the early votes too much, they seem to level out at a more natural rate later on and are usually not far off from correct.

look forward to more from you.

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09-12-2007 18:10
CLARKFADER
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Originally posted by Seven Gun
nice intro. deep.
although the main low synth/pad could do with some note changes here and there to roll it up and down.

beats are nice.
overall tho the tune is a touch plain and i lose interest later on.

could do with that low throb synth been more prominent and use the the beat switches as a guide to edit the synths around it and got nuts.

dont worry about the early votes too much, they seem to level out at a more natural rate later on and are usually not far off from correct.

look forward to more from you.


hey , cheers 4 the comment mate , i must say i am disapointed with the rating as i have had so many good comments about it , i dont think people should vote it low if they dont like the style , cause it goes against the way it has been produced and the higher ratings it has had , and if it has bin low rated people tend to listen to the higher rated tracks , i do appreciate it needs a bit of work here and there , things could be different , its just a bit dishearting if u know what i mean !!!!!!


anyway thanks 4 your input , and by the way , love the profile pic , i`ve bin a massive sopranos fan from the start , take care mate , peace !!!!!!!
09-12-2007 19:04
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Yeah mate, don't sweat about the ratings to much. They always level themselves out in the end.

Ohhhhh, this track is fucking BIG!!! Especially the beats, MetalHeadz stylee all over them. Loving the dark melodies too man but I'm not too sure about the liquidy change-up at 3.46... doesn't fit, imo. It makes the track sound like it's part of a two-track mix.

At 5.07 the track get fucking wicked again, How did you do those beats?? They're phenomenal.

Killer tune man. Lose that change-up and concentrate on the dark stuff and you'll be signed up to MetalHeadz in no time. Tongue Big Grin

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09-12-2007 21:03 Homepage of Tomos
CLARKFADER
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Originally posted by Tomos
Yeah mate, don't sweat about the ratings to much. They always level themselves out in the end.

Ohhhhh, this track is fucking BIG!!! Especially the beats, MetalHeadz stylee all over them. Loving the dark melodies too man but I'm not too sure about the liquidy change-up at 3.46... doesn't fit, imo. It makes the track sound like it's part of a two-track mix.

At 5.07 the track get fucking wicked again, How did you do those beats?? They're phenomenal.

Killer tune man. Lose that change-up and concentrate on the dark stuff and you'll be signed up to MetalHeadz in no time. Tongue Big Grin


wow , nice comment mate i`ll get on the case to change it !!!!!!

you asked about the beats n shit , well it was all about just layering the different beats together and just using a part of some of them , like chopin it to say a quarter bar and then miss matchin them up , bit of filtering here and there and put on a little delay like a 4 step , thats it basiclly , took a bit of time to get right but got there in the end !!!Cool Pleased
09-12-2007 21:17
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nice (if you mail it to me i will even play it the next time i'm spinning) (getyourowndope@hotmail.com)
10-12-2007 18:23
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f in nice work mate Huh
I cant tell you much about doing D&B Confused

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12-12-2007 23:28
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