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collective 
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Please check out my new track 'contented spirit' and post your comments here!!!
ok been long time since i posted anything on here
this is a new one i been working on for the past few hours so plz dont slate it that bad
beast are not full as they are not yet layerd as nothing is its only what i got out my head so far just got it to the first brweak down b4 the 2nd drop be nice toi have spme input as its not structured yet as i dont do that till the end
anyway its on a nice little rolling chilled thing
o yeah big ups to the . MOTHA FUCKIN BE crew as its getting bigger and better all the time love it
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did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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07-12-2007 22:57 |
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Binary Havoc
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EZ Bruv
Hows tricks
Nice vibe man
Breaks good but definately needs some additional hits and edits too liven it up some.
Melody is cool but a bit ambient, nothing really takin the initiative. Potential choon but missin a bit at the mo.
Keep at it bud
BH
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07-12-2007 23:05 |
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Tomos
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Yeah, nice track man, nice vibes and the sub sounds are really good. I've heard those drum samples before - I used them on a track I posted here a while ago! - and they sound too close to the originals. I know you've chopped them up a bit but I reckon you could tweak them a bit more or perhaps layer them and give them a more distinctive sound.
Cool melodies and good production quality throughout. Keep this baby going man, you're on the right track. 
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07-12-2007 23:15 |
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Shunyatta
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Registration Date: 28-11-2007
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Man I've been listening to this tune like, forever, it's really peaceful, great work 
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07-12-2007 23:25 |
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horrorhead
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Registration Date: 07-12-2007
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Not bad not bad, the snare seems to stick out too much to me but still sounds nice =].
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08-12-2007 05:34 |
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collective
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Registration Date: 28-11-2006
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merci
for the comments guys
binary il hit you over aim later on man
but yeah some of the comments were exactly what i was thinking so thanxs alot guys
man i gotta get some reviewing done now to peace out guys
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did you know that some men go out with men not as freinds!!! huummm thats a bit odd aint it!!!!!!
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08-12-2007 12:04 |
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Seven Gun
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nice preview.
like you said, needs more happening with the beats.
melodie could do with a bit more presence.
a few blleps and stabs would sound cool too.
bass is excellent.
i'd maybe try layer a child-note on top of the bline later in the tune to give it a touch of extra depth.
nice d-bridge kinda sound rollin here.
i can tell you are educated in the ways of junglism
ah sir
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