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coddy
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Registration Date: 25-10-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Facepaint' and post your comments here!!!
i just cant stop making tunes!!! just finished this one in the time since my last post.
quite like this too nice and simple and silly
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05-12-2007 15:51 |
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BattleDrone 
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Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Please slow down posting... there's this little rule about posting 1 track a week, we don't do this limit thing very narrow minded, but 3 in a row is a lot. Better focus on 1 track at a time.
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05-12-2007 20:30 |
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BattleDrone
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Some melodies are badly off, the whole structure is a bit messy. You introduce a new meoldy just before then end? Panning on drums is sometimes very extreme, keep them mono. Around 2:50 it's very messy.
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05-12-2007 20:52 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Looove the opening melody. Excellent stuff, reminds me of Paradise Lost. Beats are really cool too but they are very distorted. Shame, spoils them a bit.
The synths around 1.40... hmmm, not bad. Yep, definitely gets messy around 2.50. Too much distortion. Sounds everything is set too loud.
Definitely some good ideas in here man, especially the melodies during the intro and outro.
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08-12-2007 11:47 |
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GreatFisherCat
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Registration Date: 21-06-2005
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ookay, been deep in RL for a while and youre a new face to me Coddy....
Starts as atmospheric intro, with melodic layer that builds anticipation. This works really well. But then you go off building layers on top of each other for allmost 2 minutes. This period is too long and too stale to my taste, please introduce either melodic or rhythmic variation or samples to keep me interested. Or just keep it shorter.
Similar repeating feeling follows the tune all along, which is strange because you do have plenty to listen to and variation in your structures.
Mixing is really really clean. To extent of being too easy. Try comparison with top notch stuff to see, if you should mastering with more rough hand.
Interesting tune, I re-listen this now like 3rd time, and while it does not get me too excited, it does not irritate me either. I like your style, and I'll be interested to hear more from you.
Next one into pipeline, please!
-Mikko
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14-12-2007 14:46 |
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GreatFisherCat
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Originally posted by Tomos
Yep, definitely gets messy around 2.50. Too much distortion. Sounds everything is set too loud.
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Lol, that part I loved most 
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14-12-2007 15:00 |
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