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Lightningflash
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Please check out my new track 'Gazz2' and post your comments here!!!
an other go at this tune,
may give up
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05-12-2007 00:16 |
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coddy
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Dont give up for starters.
Cool break stabs in the intro.
pretty cool build up but it sounds a little disjointed.
mmmmmm dont know abuot that first drop with those organs makes it sound very rushed.
cool ideas. that drop at 3.22 is WAY to sudden.
i would suggest a little less drums they distract the listener from listening.
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05-12-2007 16:08 |
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Seven Gun
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big upz lightningflash!
i think the bass needs a bit of attention here.
maybe a cleaner sample and a bit of compression would work.
also the snare seems to get lost in the mix a bit
when everything is in.
nice beat edits. i always find your work interesting.
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06-12-2007 15:03 |
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Lightningflash
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ok Iv listened to it with your comments in mind and I can see now what needs to be done, Hope you two like it when I post Gazz 3.
anyway Thanxx for the pointers.
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06-12-2007 22:49 |
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Tomos
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Great work, very original. The only thing the track lacks is a hard bassline somewhere, especially when the beats are rollin. That would up the intensity some more. Other than that, just keep doing what you're doing.
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08-12-2007 12:08 |
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diggin this intro, heafty heafty, drum's come in a bit harsh, scared the ol man, might have been the intention, forshure diggin that filthy band round 3:04, heafty good idea, sounds great, this took a couple listen's to fully grasp but dam its a fuckn good tune, those caotic chord's on the stabby strings are heafty, tunes a big treat, cheers Lightningflash.
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13-12-2007 07:32 |
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just had another listen and i thought i should add that the mix seem's to be distorting a good bit on my end,, cheers.
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13-12-2007 07:46 |
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Lightningflash
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Hi
Im v grateful for your encouragement and I am having a go at stiking an interesting bass in cos TOM said so, and its a good idea. so look out for the update
THANX
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14-12-2007 00:07 |
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