 OBLIVION12 - stone the crows-re-dun |
OBLIVION12 
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'stone the crows-re-dun' and post your comments here!!!
hey there! thanks again for all the advice everyone, i am learning from all the tips you lot post cheers! same again! i tried to make my own bass sounds instead of using sample cd's and i will get better at it as i practice more, let me know what you think of this
all the best
Glenn
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03-12-2007 20:17 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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big dutty intro, fuck sake, drop is pure slick, bass is fantastic, smelly in the best of way's, yur ideas are top notch, pure big big big, heafty impressive effective track, diggin all of it, pure genious, cheers for the treat Oblivian12.
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04-12-2007 07:36 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Your bass sounds are not bad, but you have used some FX on them that fuck them up totally, make them mono and stop that faser stuff they are powerless.
The drums need a complete redo, they are really thin. The melody around 3' is to far in the background.
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04-12-2007 15:28 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Agree with the Battle Master. Bass sounds and beats need a lot of work. The kick really needs to fatten up. Trying layering it 2 or 3 times if need be. Same with the snare. Some of the melodies are conflicting with each other - there's a few notes in there which are outta key with everything else - especially the arcade-type pad.
I do like the intro tho, that works well.
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04-12-2007 19:08 |
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coddy
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Registration Date: 25-10-2007
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cool key intros.
if your gonna use fm7 chord pad you need to make it "your own"
choice vocal sample ragga muffin
cool basslines dude but you need to let the drums play to let them shine not so many cuts.
i must say it all sounds a little separated from each other.
Your sequence structure lets down the bassline try some more consistent alternations of 16 bars
cool stuff keep up the good work
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05-12-2007 16:41 |
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