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coddy
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Registration Date: 25-10-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Fuckdat' and post your comments here!!!
heres an old one for ya.
From the archives.
Its a bit rough round the edges but very fat
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27-11-2007 16:36 |
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RV_
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Registration Date: 26-11-2007
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Original style.
Good use of fx on the intro, I think u should at a stronger sub behind some of the bass notes to add a more obvious melody.
Strong kick and snare, maybe at more percussion in the loop with a shuffle before your second snare, maybe throw in a premade break with a good rhythm removing the kick n snare.
Grimey bass sound, I would eq to make the b-line more defined, its a little muddy, eqing it below 100hz and adding a sub, and maybe bringing out some higher frequency.
Definitely got some good parts, if crispened up, it'l make a good track.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by RV_: 27-11-2007 18:16.
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27-11-2007 18:14 |
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BattleDrone 
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Sound quality is not that great. Most of it sounds muffled and the stereo seems to extreme on some thing. The track seems to be constructed quite strange, but the different bits and pieces sound cool. If you could make a logic progression in the track and completely redo the FX and EQing this could be a good track
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27-11-2007 22:59 |
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Lightningflash
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there are some good bit here, yes its a bit muddy but I can see youve got style.
you are going on my list of, look out frors
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29-11-2007 00:12 |
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OBLIVION12
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Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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the melody at 1.20 - 1-35 is quality more of that in the tune, i think this should be based around that, that what i would do, dark and dangerous sound, weird structure here and there but so are mine, keep it up
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29-11-2007 11:58 |
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Tomos
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Looooove dem basslines, especially the one during the first half!! Could be a tad louder I reckon cos the snare is overpowering it. In fact, the snare is too loud throughout the mix. Also, it needs a lower, fatter sound. It's a bit pingy.
Nice ideas in this one, great basslines. Keep on workin it man.
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01-12-2007 11:28 |
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Seven Gun
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Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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firstly the tune is too long.
shorten the intro too.
structure needs work. bit too disruptive.
the ideas and composition are ok.
unfortunately the whole track sounds too muddy.
this 'mud' is a dnb producers nightmare and it happens most between the 150hz and the 300hz frequencies.
look up an eq tutorial to get a grip of this. i have read a few.
the bass needs to hit harder too. turn up the sample slightly and add some bass on an eq on the sample.
actually, add an eq plug-in on at least your major samples in a track.
subtractive eqing is usually best. turn down the killing frequencies then turn up the whole sample.
works well for me.
big up.
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