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OBLIVION12 
Producer
Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'unknown' and post your comments here!!!
hi, i made this recently and would like to know what people think, i use MAKING WAVES as a sequencer, i find it easy to use and get idea's down quick. loads of vst's and im slowly gettin better at using vsti's. give it a listen and write a comment, ive still got a lot of work to go before ive got a professional sound! i definitely know that! just let me know what you think
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26-11-2007 19:07 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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There are differences in levels throughout the track, you should avoid that. Keep the drums at the same level unless you are doing a buildup or something. The first 2 minutes sound like intro to me, that's too much. Around 2:50-3:05 is really a pause in the track with just drums, this is weird, think of a dancing crowd, you have to keep them going. Some instrument has some nasty clicks but I can't figure out which one it is. Structure needs work, melodies are a bit weird from time to time.
Deffo not a bad track though, you're on the way up.
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26-11-2007 21:02 |
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stickbubbly
mad man
Registration Date: 16-09-2004
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starts off nice.
drums get louder at certain points. might want to fix that up.
i like the atmo in the intro. creepy. nice vibe. kind of cheesy synths right before the drop.
interesting drop. industrial techy sound.
not bad. keep it up. your ideas and melodies are good. i think you need to work a bit on the mix down and structure.
cheers!
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27-11-2007 02:29 |
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Paracyte
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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eZ there,
first thing is very very quite track ,i bearly can hear some parts ,like battle said some parts of beats are louder ,nice pads you got there ,nice one on phased bass synth,yeah you might like to fix this levels bro,There is some tension in track ,but it still needs work.Keep it up.
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27-11-2007 06:50 |
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RV_
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Registration Date: 26-11-2007
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Good initial drum loop, second loop needs to sit a bit nicer in the mix, too much variation in volume from the first loop to the second. You might benefit from sending all your drum loops to a bus and compressing them together to stop the variation in volume and to mould them together better, but be sure not to over compress it because some of the loops you've got there already have shitloads (some of the hits sound a little over compressed) on them, fix the levels first.
The loop is a little bland, more fx needed and melodic sounds, all the melodies are looped continuously, some variation would be good and some longer loops, their all 2bars long.
Sum good bass sounds, Work on the all round mix, maybe put all the bass on a bass to keep it at a good volume, but again fix the levels first, maybe look at the levels on the mixer to se that they are all hitting around the same point.
Some ideas, good work.
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27-11-2007 18:46 |
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Tomos
Infidel
Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Nice start, got me head bobbin. The mix is a little quiet... and then it gets louder. Try to keep the levels constant. The quiet bit around 1.50 is not very inspiring, doesn't add much to the track. I like the bassline melodies. Also love the beats in the middle of the track! Definite headbangin material. 
Some of the synths are really quiet compared to the beats. I can hardly hear them - shame, cos the melodies sound good. Some nice bassline melodies towards the end of the track.
Overall, a pretty disjointed track with some definite promise. Nice.
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