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26-11-2007 19:17 |
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Tomos
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Not my favourite of yours fellas, but still good. Really likin the snare sound, good work with the 3xosc - as per usual - and an interesting synth melody. Solid song structure too, sounds pro.
However, what's lacking for me is a few more hooks and a bit more variation. Around the 4 min mark I found my interest waning cos the track is pretty much based around the same synth and bass melody. I reckon the track could do with a little more craziness, especially with the beats - perhaps by dropping in a few dirty ass break edits before the main drops, etc. And then once it drops, put an extra layer of beats on top of the existing beats to really get the heads hangin. Also, I'd include a few extra bass sounds to mix it up a little.
Also, I just noticed - everything is pretty much in the middle, would be nice to have a few little elements that pan to the left and right.
But yeah, tight and solid. Nice work fellas.
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26-11-2007 19:18 |
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Binary Havoc
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EZ Gun Culture
Great intro, quite a departure from your normal style, I like.
Good work as per usual wiv the wobble. String part is really nice.
Nice loud crisp mix
Only bit of constructive criticism from me would be that maybe its lacking another section to the tune instead of alternating between the string led section and the bass led part.
Thats all though
quality production as per
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26-11-2007 19:40 |
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BattleDrone
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Totally agree with Binary Havoc and Tomos... Track needs variation and crazyness. The production is top notch.
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26-11-2007 20:56 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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26-11-2007 21:15 |
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CULTURE BOY
v v v iv a record missing
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26-11-2007 22:08 |
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stickbubbly
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nice tune.
good levels. luv the dirty saw.
melodies are a bit too simple for my own taste and i think you could have a few more effects flyin around in the back ground.
overall, sounds pro. nice work.
cheers.
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27-11-2007 00:05 |
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Paracyte
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ez Gun & Culture
Nice one on intro ,sounds good and not too long for that type of tune ,very very nice layerd snare 
like it ,bass sounds good but... more variation needed.Also a bit variation in beats will do the job ,like Tomos said some different break on top will do.Overall mix crispy and clear.Very good pro job.
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27-11-2007 06:37 |
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tryptech
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JUUUUUUMMMMMMPPPPPPPPPP UP
nice bass and powerbreakkkk
you arent so bad hhaa
dont know you are a dick
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27-11-2007 14:50 |
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coddy
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Awesome!!
Only thing i could recommend is maybe a key change on the main bassline to give it melodic dynamics over 8ight or sixteen bars.
Keep up the awesome work.
What synth did you use for that bassline??
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27-11-2007 16:49 |
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RV_
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Wikid tracked. Gotta luv the wobble bass.
Great mix, great drums as always.
Suspenseful intro pulled off nicely.
Great bassline, maybe personal preference, but I would put a little (more) distortion on the second bass sound. Sounds like a spectra wave above the square which I think always sound good distorted to sound extra grimey.
Track flows very nicely, maybe adding in another bass synth to play some fill melodies. Part from a little variation, alls good. Professional sounding track.
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27-11-2007 19:20 |
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CULTURE BOY
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27-11-2007 19:27 |
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Lightningflash
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very synthetic sound
could get even more synthetic by using electronic drums?
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28-11-2007 23:26 |
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Seven Gun
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lovely jubbly!
anymore love for this?
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29-11-2007 01:58 |
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Paracyte
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Originally posted by Seven Gun
lovely jubbly!
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Holyy Christ !
Awesome seven ! where did ya find it ?
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29-11-2007 04:29 |
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theaudiodemon
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Easy now. Liking the snare on this one.
Tracks very good defo go down a storm on a dancefloor.
Variation? Doesnt really need it, definatly flows, besides you never see the likes of (e.g) g-dub making a different drop for the 2nd drop ey? Keep it rollin 
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03-12-2007 17:56 |
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napster55
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man. when i heard this tune on your myspace u were smashin it i rated this tune bare. im ratin the drums bare there just so easy flowing but not even that punchy and aggressive fits the songs perfect and that smooth drop into it makes it worth listening, the atcually tune itself id buy it just for smoking purposes nice tune to roll to when u got a burn hanging from your lip. savage tune
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27-11-2008 19:08 |
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CULTURE BOY
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