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tryptech 
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Please check out my new track 'Degustation' and post your comments here!!!
Ajj
last number I made
did my best for mastering
hope you like it
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23-11-2007 20:21 |
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Binary Havoc
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Ez Scaranja
Writing review as I listen
Like the pads in the intro, like the panned fx although goes on a bit too long maybe?
Bass is cool although could do with beefing up in the lower mid / low register.
Beats ok, a bit minimalist, could do with some more support in the form of some breaks n ting I reckon.
Yeah, definately not enough bass man, specially in the latter part of the tune 3:00+
BH
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23-11-2007 22:43 |
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Wood.
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the high tone sine seems a bit off in the track to me, not fitting
I likethe break.
nice subs, nice elements throughout the track
good structure, but the buildup isnt my cup of tea, it has a monotone feeling sometimes
nice pads at some points, but try to bring em out more?
I heard some strange noises on 2:11-12-13, maybe get rid of those (detail though)
edit: haha nevermind about the strange noises I figured out it had something to do with my PC intern beeps xD sorry
the bass going different on 02:40 seems a bit strange, perhaps let him wah-wah longer instead of these short wahwahs?
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24-11-2007 10:43 |
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BattleDrone
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Lovely.
I don't understand why you use 2 different drumlines like that. They are very similar, you could use 1 very different break as a last bar of a block as "contrast" so to speak, but what you are doing doesn't have a lot of effect.
Track is rarther simple, not too much instruments going on, but it does the job really well.... I like it. Maybe some melodic structure could keep the intro more interesting.
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24-11-2007 14:52 |
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Paracyte
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Ello there mr Scaranja.
Nice nice crispy beats ! i think right channel got some clipping ,especially when bass line plays on low notes,check it out but it can be my system,Very good work.
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24-11-2007 15:08 |
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tryptech
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Thanks for the comments
will fix the problems and repost
to paracyte
theres indeed some clipping
i noticed it too, not much, i will fix that
not your system
thanks for the tips
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24-11-2007 16:27 |
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tryptech
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thanks battledrone, jeah
i kept it minimalistic, dont knwo why, ihad many more elments in it first, but i kept deletibng, and ws pleased with the clearity of the mix, so i finished it like this.
glad you liked it and took the time to listen
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24-11-2007 16:29 |
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Tomos
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Very nice melodies and sound. Well done. Lots of clarity in there which is refreshing to hear. Love the bass melodies, they are a tad lous tho - you can hear them distort on a few occassions. A few more variations on the melodies and beat would be nice but overall, a very nice track!!
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25-11-2007 09:41 |
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tryptech
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thanks tomos, jeah know about the little distortion,thanks for your listening, really appreciate it, greetz.
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25-11-2007 11:00 |
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KEMZINO
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love the moody pads, the tension building - also the dry drums sound really cool. nice throbbing bass.
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25-11-2007 16:17 |
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stickbubbly
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nice tune
i like how the drums first come in with the pad chopped up. sounds sweet.
drums are good but seem a bit light. i think they could benifit from more layers.
lead noise is cool. some notes seem to be a bit too loud though.
cool melodies, nice track. cheers.
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26-11-2007 05:34 |
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Seven Gun
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youi have improved massivly recently.
your recent stuff has been of a higher standard.
this is ok but not your best.
nice chunky beats. bass needs a bit of work tho.
more resonance maybe.
big up
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26-11-2007 18:06 |
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tryptech
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