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Gregg 
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Registration Date: 16-05-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Memento' and post your comments here!!!
So this is one of my newer tunes. It's not finished yet, so I need your help and reviews!
peez.
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22-11-2007 22:22 |
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2clix
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Registration Date: 17-11-2007
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Seems like craze and juju started writing a track and then panacea ran up in the studio, tied em up, threw down a german vocal, bitchslapped the both of em, finished the track saved it then uploaded it to .be and then ran out of the studio like a monkey on crack lol I like it overall
peace
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23-11-2007 06:45 |
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alternate force
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nice tune man , but in parts disapointing , the overall structure and beats sound nice , but everything seems to be in the wrong place for me , i think it would be better if the second breakdown with the distorted bass was the main part of the song , cause that was what got my attention !!!!
like i say the i liked the drums and i think the sctatching sample went pefectly with the tune , i did not think i liked the german speaking sample , but most probberly cause i cant speak german , ha ha !!!!!
at the start the synths need beefing up a bit , quite old skool sounding , which is not a bad thing , nice arrangments in places , lots of variations , 8 out of 10 for me , keep at it !!!
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23-11-2007 12:43 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Pretty choatic structure, a bit disorientating for me. 
The main synthline at the start sounds outta tune to me. Not sure about that Amen - heard that pattern too many times. In fact, I think I've got the same wav sample myself!
Some of the melodies later on also sound out of key with the other melodies... you might want to have another look at them.
The best part of this track is definitely from 3.03 to 3.27 when you use that scratch sample with the beats! 
Awesome.
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23-11-2007 19:39 |
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tryptech
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Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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liek the intro beats
sometimes it sounds like its getting stuck when that synth comes in
good job on this one though
very jungly
bass has some frquenciesnot fitting to the rest
greetz
nice musical theory in it
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23-11-2007 20:32 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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The ghosts on some of the break need work. The structure is way too complex, you could do things much more simple and get a better track out of it. That lead sounds nice and the melody is fine, but that doesn't fit into the track, it's to dreamy and too much computer game sound. After the drop at 2:30 the track changes totally, this is much better, change the first part (between intro and drop) to match this part and your track will get a much higher score. That breakdown at 3:49 really ruins the atmosphere and it's completely weird. Again the game-soundtrack synth which is not good in this track. This track sounds very schizophrenic, a nice and friendly track witch switches into a dirty mean son of a bitch from time to time. I think you better stick to 1 style.
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24-11-2007 15:09 |
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Gregg
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Thx for all the reviews. I tried so far to change what you said...and I'm kinda stuck cause I can't get rid of that dreamy video game part (who wants to finish this shit??? 
)...Thx again, cheers!
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28-11-2007 18:40 |
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Rudeone
love & light
Registration Date: 15-10-2005
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beats sounding good way too much high end on the mix. play some instruments few octaves deeper
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28-11-2007 21:51 |
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0bx
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Registration Date: 25-11-2007
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Nice flow of ideas, keeps it intresting. I find the break around 2.19 is a bit too much though, made me feel a bit disapointed.
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28-11-2007 22:15 |
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