 2clix - Deeper |
2clix 
Doctor Obvious
Registration Date: 17-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'Deeper' and post your comments here!!!
This is my first track! I use FL5 and have only been making dnb for about 3 months, I have alot of learning to do and you'll hear it, hopefully after this I can get a grasp of what im doing wrong. So tear me a new one .be!
p.s. might be a little explicit, sorry if your offended
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21-11-2007 21:16 |
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OBLIVION12
Producer
Registration Date: 16-11-2007
Posts: 80
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yeah i like the twisted dark vibe you have on this track, i like the piano at the beginning, that works well, it needs a little work but so do mine, all the idea's are in place,we are both learning, we will get there eventually
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22-11-2007 00:20 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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There's hope for you.
You messed up the sound bad. What did you put on the master channel of your mixer? I guess you are using some kind of stereo expander. Drop it.
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 Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
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22-11-2007 01:24 |
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Tomos
Infidel
Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Some good original ideas, especially the beats. But the whole track kinda lacks direction. It needs more... well, balls. (Mind you, there's probably too many balls already in it 
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Basslines need beefing up, need to sound a bit scarier. Melodies are pretty good tho.
Nice track for a first go... keep at it man and lay off the porn for a while eh.
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