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OBLIVION12 
Producer
Registration Date: 16-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'spiders' and post your comments here!!!
hi, please listen to my track and let me know what you think, Ive tried to take onboard the advice offered by listeners, thanks to all those who write reviews, any advice on how to improve my tune will be nice, I hope you like it
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21-11-2007 01:55 |
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equipped
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Registration Date: 20-05-2005
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Fuck sake, this a treat, to the point, really diggin how long you hold those eerie synth's, this a fuckn beuty tune, heafty ripper for road, those bongo's were a real nice addition, maybe let them go longer, heafty production, forshure diggin yur sound, cheers.
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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by equipped: 21-11-2007 02:20.
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21-11-2007 02:19 |
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Paracyte
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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hi.
Love the intro but more variation in beat will do excellent work,tbh after the drop i expect something heavier ,but ,ur idea ,ur track 
very darkish vibe ,something similliar to old ed rush productions ,Whole track stands on pads and Bass i will add some melody as well ,some very very dark synth with crazy melody ,good job on all addons like bongos and ghost snares,but still more variation in beat will do only good to track.Overall nice track indeed but needs some more ideas to it.Great work.
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21-11-2007 05:32 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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That second snare at 0:15 comes in in a weird way and too early. Do it later, make a minidrop out of it and change the kick as well. The snare sound is not the best.
After the drop this is even more of a problem.
I'm not feeling a story in here, it sounds like a lot of ideas in a row, each idea is nice and it sounds ok, but there is to little connection. Try to limit the used elements and re-use struff from the intro after the drop, not just FX also bass sounds, melodies etc...
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21-11-2007 09:08 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Hmm, yeah pretty good. However, the kick sounds slightly disorted - you can definitely notice it at the start. It doesn't sound intentional.
Nice vocal samples, they fit the vibe of the track.
The drop at 1.47 is pretty flat. Nothing exciting happens - you should bring in some new elements and melodies at the drop. It sounds too much like the previous 1.46.
After the drop the kick becomes almost inaudible, you can bearly hear it. The snare needs to be punchier and harder too.
I like the dark subby bassline. Some nice darkish melodies towards the end as well.
The track kinda drags on tho - probably cos the beats don't change enough.
Btw, the mix as a whole sounds really muddy. Thankfully, you've got the reverb at a good level but the whole thing needs to clearer and sharper.
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22-11-2007 19:05 |
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Shunyatta
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Registration Date: 28-11-2007
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Hey! I really enjoyed the dark pads you've got goin on there, and the latter synths are very good as well, reminds me of somethin neurofunkish, which I really love. The problem with this track seems to be the drums, a lil bit too plain and boring. If you were to work the drums a bit more, this would be a really good track I believe. One more thing, you've got to have more dynamics in the early synths and, some nice dark melodies would really sooth the whole vibe of the track! Overall nice work, nice Ideas too, keep it going mate
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