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Please check out my new track 'Hamburger Skin.' and post your comments here!!!
added some pads n edits to burger skin.
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very relaxing man! Drums are superb, padz are fantastic and sound really analog and phat. Make a full song out of this.
Speed it up a little maybe.
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totaly different to what I expected! Quite nice to tell the truth. The drums are a bit muddy, maybe cut the low end a bit. I do like the snare though. The sample is good. Could do with a bass line, nice sliding fretless style I think. Not bad at all, sound needs a bit of eq'ing 
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Really cool, I like the chill feel of the piece.
The pads are really nice but occasionally seemed to have sort of a tinny ring to them, like at 0:33.
At the start of the piece, the drums and pads come in after two beats, it might flow a bit more to give a full measure of delayed vocals before everything kicks in.
I really like the open hihat sound, it's nice to hear those being used effectively.
The song might benefit from a few more bass sounds.
Overall very exciting sounds in this one, a nice departure from your other recent work 
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19-11-2007 09:39 |
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Cheers, will slap some proper reply's tomorrow, heafty reviews, it the 4:00am's in cold town, and agree, forshure need's speedin up i think, and yup the low end, way to much, fully agree, diggin the change in timing idea, thank's again, big cheers for the feedback.
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nice pad, no questions. But its a bit overpowering the break. Turn it down a bit. I think its a bit off key with the bass. Doesnt suit the melody i think. Nice voice sample in the background. I like it, but you havent made too many changes into the original track imo. Needs still a lot of work
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19-11-2007 13:38 |
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just had a sober listen, and yeah this was dam lazy on my part, will sort it out and post a better update, thanks again for the reviews, cheers.
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19-11-2007 19:08 |
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I want to ride around smoking a spliff to this, so chillaxing! I agree that you could have strung the intro out a bit longer, I really like vocal and the snare. The pads do overpower it a lil bit, I think the bass being offkey works for some parts and not so much in others, wouldnt be a bad idea to have some slight variations. The drums imo sound great. It would be interesting to hear this a bit faster then again it might take away from overall chillness Does twisted individual come up with your track names lol
all in all I def want to hear a longer finished version of this!
peace hombre
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19-11-2007 19:41 |
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Definitely feeling this one mate. I'm vegetarian but this burger is tasting fuckin sweet. Sounds like trip hop to me, or maybe fast hip hop. Got me head bobbin. Love those melodic pads!! Sub bass perfectly compliments them. Snare is crisp and pure.
Love this one. Finish it and post it!
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19-11-2007 19:58 |
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im like'n this track alot. really nice pads. works well with the bass. i think some sax riffs would fit into this nicely.
needs an intro and outro.
cheers!!
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21-11-2007 03:53 |
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big cheers bubbly, feedback's alway's helpfull.
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21-11-2007 04:11 |
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ello mighty eq !
Very chillout track ,good to burn one fat thru it 
like the pads ,very misterious ,nice job on the vocals ,beat is just spot on for that type of track ,just more variation could do but i guess as u still work on it ,will be done.Nice nice track indeed !
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